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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From soloflamelady on July 01, 2007
    I am still so in love with this little world I never want you to stop writing it. I can't wait for the next installment everytime I get the email that another has come in I get to happy for words. Thank you so much update soon.
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  • From chantalmalfoy on June 18, 2007
    Wow... So Allie is comming back, huh?

    Oh... That sex scene was wonderful, sweet, hot and sexy. I LOVED it! I do hope poor Jason doesn't get his heart broken again... And I would love to see more scenes with him and Richard!!!
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  • From EneylaElendil on June 18, 2007
    Hey,
    I have been following this story for a while now and thought it high time i sent you a review. I have the story with an open mind, cascading the information you give about the realities of this type of relationship. I must admit that at first i was shocked and a little unsure of the topic matter.

    As i began reading more of the story i came realise how loving these relationships can be and you write with deep understanding and empathy. i must admit i have enjoyed reading this on my spare days when not revising! Keep up the good work, and a very good job.


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  • From lkm40 on June 17, 2007
    This was a wonderful chapter. I adore Jason and am so happy to see him paired with Richard--even if Grant doesn't like him. At first, I thought the scene between Allie and Max was going to be a dream sequence, but I'm glad that you're going to have them try and work things out. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ozarkmoon on June 17, 2007
    Ch. 124- NO! NO! Is Max really that stupid? He cannot mean to be friendly to that woman! Poop! On a lighter and more positive note - I like that Richard and Jason are getting together. Another happy couple. That would be nice!
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  • From Leentjef on June 17, 2007
    wow this was bloody fantastic chapter, i like this chapter from the first word to the last
    and i am happy for jason and richard and hope there love will make it. and i am also looking forward
    to see wath max and alyse will do, will they work it out?
    just wow keep up the great work and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    and just can't waite to read the next chapter
    bye bye
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  • From hpobsessed on June 17, 2007
    That was sweet! I don't know how I feel about Allie and Max trying
    to get back together; she treated him and the kids really badly.
    But the development with Jason and Richard is very nice! I hope
    Ricard takes good care of Jason and the babies; I think they would
    make a nice little family. Keep the updates coming!
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  • From soloflamelady on June 16, 2007
    I am sooooo happy about rich and jason but I can't stand the witch allie she needs to stay the hell away from max and the kids she just is no good. Sorry to me there isn't any excuse leaving your kids espcially a newborn. Keep up the good work folks more soon please
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  • From willowgirl on June 16, 2007
    Wow! This chapter was full of surprises. Richard and Jason? I hope Richard really likes Jason and isn't just using him for his research. I would feel so sorry for Jason if he was used. I'm so happy that Max and Allie are going to try and work on their marriage. I am a little sad that she no longer wants a Dom and Sub relationship. Poor little Sarah is missing her mommy so much. My heart breaks for her.
    This was a wonder chapter. Well done! Thanks for another peek into the lives of the people of Echo.
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  • From Bslehofer on June 16, 2007
    OMG! I love this chapter so much. Rich and Jason!!! Woo hoo! And Allie...what a surprise. Didn't see that one coming at all. Nicely done. Can't wait for the next chpater.
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  • From chantalmalfoy on June 05, 2007
    I do hope that Jason is alright... :( And this Fleymann's "hormonal thing" is absolutely a riot! I love it! (I assume that's why Davy's being moody too... well that and Max...

    I feel bad for Max but why is he being such a jerk?

    Thanks for the update! Please do so again very very soon!!!

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  • From soloflamelady on June 03, 2007
    it is save jason time woo hoo. I just know that rich and jason are going to get together but it seems you put a stop to my triad of max/davy/greg boo hoo. I hope your feeling better and that you update soon.
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  • From angelnomiko on June 03, 2007
    man .. they are going to have a lot of chocolate.. i hope they get to jason ok and find him well .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Leentjef on June 02, 2007
    wow but now please post soon i want tonow what will happen up on the mounthen
    and make jason and new doc an couple
    keep going and post ssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn
    bye bye
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  • From willowgirl on June 01, 2007
    Yeah, your back I hope you are doing better. I love your story so much. I love how your story has so many characters in it. Echo feels like a real town to me. I wish could move there. So Max had to take care of something to do with Allie? I hope that something was giving her a long hard spanking. I really wish Allie would come begging(on her hands and knees)for Max to take her back. I also think it would be cool for Max ,Allie and Jason to become a threesome.(hint,hint) Then Max would have that big family he has always wanted.
    I have just started reading this wonderful fiction about three weeks ago and I have a question about chapter 100. In the chapter Sev said he was going to punish Harry later at home for his behaviour towards Grant. I don't remember reading about his punishment. Did Sev just forget about Harry's punishment because Grant got ill that day? I was wondering because I don't know much about this lifestyle. Would Sev spank Harry when he is pregnant or would he punish another way? I guessed Harry knew he was going to be spanked because he said he was dreading the punishment. I know it silly but I have wondered about Harry's punishment ever since I read that chapter.
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