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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From Severine on March 28, 2007
    Wow, that was intense!!!
    although quite funny, to have Molly and Grant both mothering Harry...
    Than you for another great chap.
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  • From kellar on March 28, 2007
    i love this story i cant wait for the next chapter please repost soon i love it so much
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  • From lkm40 on March 28, 2007
    This was an incredible chapter. I have been enjoying this story since the beginning, but this chapter just really struck home for me. I had a horrible time with my mother-in-law when I first married my husband and often felt inadequate. I could sympathize with Harry. It is amazing how you have touched on so much in detailing the damage that an abusive relationship can do. I applaud your writing and this wonderful story.
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  • From goodmorningstarshine2008 on March 27, 2007
    well i like your story so far.. i just wanted t comment and brag about myself and knowing what androgynous means from english class... well thats all...

    debbi
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  • From Weirkat on March 26, 2007
    Damn, I really hope the Weasley's give it to Harry. What he did to Grant was totally uncalled for, and that young man needs a strong dose of reality shoved in his face.

    My husband and mother aren't the that friendly towards each other, but they are polite to each other and don't make waves when we visit twice a month. That's been going on for over 20 years, so Harry has no excuse to be so cruel to Grant. The man made one mistake and Harry's acting like he tried to murder him or something.

    Thanks for the update! I've enjoyed this story since I read the very first chapter.
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  • From Aalto on March 15, 2007
    No offence but who the hell is William Weasley?? I've never heard of him. But the story's progressing well, though I'd love to see a bit more happening in each chapter and that means longer chapters. Keep writing, it's an intersting story.
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  • From Tropicalshortie23 on March 12, 2007
    its good really good for the ones ive read on this site most of the one of fanfiction are mostly all the same the really good ones are The Mathias Prophecys
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  • From cria31 on March 12, 2007
    can't wait to the next chapter
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  • From cria31 on March 08, 2007
    Hi
    I have been reading your story over the past couple of days. I can honestly say I have laughed and cried along with all the gang in Echo. I noticed you started writing this puppy way back in 2005 . I take my hat of to you .
    Reading the last few chapters I was surprised what went on between Max and Allie. I really felt for her before she gave birth . She seemed really at the end of her rope with the whole pregnancy. I really hope its a bad case of baby blues.It seemed that she did care for her daughter and husband. I know you made her a bitch for a reason but I do feel for Allie . You tell us shes been used and abused in the past . It seems she came out of it swinging at everyone and anyone fighting what has been done to her .okay with all the wrong people. What is it they say . We hurt the ones we love. Thats how I see her . I hope she turns up again and she and Max get back togeather in the end .
    The sud dom relationships are ticking all my boxes. There seems to be real relationships between everyone. Please could we have the doms mess up a bit more now and again . Sev can't be in the right all the time can he. I look forward to reading the rest of the story .
    I am trying to write a story with a sub dom relationships. Your story has given me alot to think about. Its not set in the HP world though.
    Thank you for the story so far
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  • From chantalmalfoy on March 07, 2007
    Oh no. Harry is turning into an Alley! Someone smack that boy's bottom!
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  • From ozarkmoon on March 06, 2007
    CH. 117 - Oh dear. Harry has gone 'round the bend now. This entire visit to England will not turn out well. No. Not at all. Things are not looking good one bit. Oh my goodness.
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  • From morganlefay1958 on March 05, 2007
    GRRRRR....that boy is lucky he's pregnant... *hands Sev the flogger for after Harry delivers*
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  • From Leentjef on March 05, 2007
    Very very very good chapter and i find it very low from harry
    i hope they will find grant and get him to the burrow.
    keep writing and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From love2bug63670 on March 05, 2007
    God Harry has an attitude, I was never that bad when I was pregnant. I have followed this story from the begining and have reread it twice, hope you can update sooner rather than latter, but I will just sit back and wait like I always do.
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  • From shelagh on March 04, 2007
    Oh someone please spank both Harry and Grant for being silly!!!!I hope Hermione or Ron finds Grant pretty quickly and sets things straight. Allie needs more than a spankiing, maybe a full round of medication.
    I wonder if Sev's father will take it upon himself to contact Sev now. I hope Harry can stay clear of him while he is in England.
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