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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - Missa on January 12, 2007
    I just have to day this before I even start reading this one. HOLY SHIT! I mean 114 chapters?? I've never read one that went beyond 90. and I mean really. That's increadiblly long and I hope that I have the patience to read each chapter and not just sip over some of them. And the fact that this story has been uploaded for only 6months is really saying something for your dedication and 777 reviews? Wow..Kudoos to you and I'm looking forward to reading this one. It must be a real piece of work.
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  • From ANON - Hotaru_lock on January 03, 2007
    I love the way you have Davy as a once culinary student. I just pulled myself out of culinary school for another major, so I know the type. And the knife kits are awesome so the fact that you have him usinf one from the classes is totally cool. Please don't stop anytime soon, I love the story and anxiously await the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - richard throw on December 30, 2006
    ma'am, i would like to thank you for showing me that there are a lot of good Doms out there. If I wasnt gay i might have asked you to help me find a female Dom(i like pleasing people, and im relatively quiet and (no disrespect. if i have disrespected you then this boy is sorry) submissive unless angered. Btw i just relized that i live in Indiana and you prolly live in WV.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on December 27, 2006
    Jason is such a sweet character. I can not wait to see what becomes pf him. I hope his story turns happier in upcomming chapters.
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 21, 2006
    wow this was a wonderful chapter and so long i love it.
    keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - absinthe on December 20, 2006
    PLEASE PLEASE kill off that manipulative little bitch. Max deserves sooooo much better.
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  • From ANON - SAnn on December 15, 2006
    I open this up, thinking "This is just going to be cliche crap" (no offense!), but then I actually, you know, read it. O_o Officially my favorite Sev/Harry story on here. And definitely my favorite D/s story there is! Just because no one portrays it like reality. I think I want to hit Allie *slaps my wrist* bad me. I shouldn't think such mean thoughts. Actually, I wouldn't mind yelling at Max... He's still a married man! *shakes head*

    Anyway, what was I saying? Oh, yes. I read all 113 chapters in 4 days (technically only 3 days, but there you have it), and when I got to the end I was thinking "that's it? I need more!". Yes, I have become addicted. I'm in the Lifestyle too, by the way, and few people actually know, I think... Heh. But, that's why I am enjoying this story so much, because it's so realistic, in my mind, then most others I've read, especially on here.

    So keep up the wonderful story, and I will be checking often for updates!
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  • From ANON - absinthe on December 06, 2006
    I really really love this story and wait for every installment with bated breath. I hope it keeps on for a very long time yet. Just one thing though, you really need to kill Allie off, she is a major BITCH pain in the ass. There has to be someone waaaaay better for Max out there who would be happy to take on him and two kids. I hope Harry's thanksgiving dinner goes well, and nothing explodes, lol. Can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From ANON - Michele on December 03, 2006
    I am loving this story and that is saying something because i usually don't like AU at all.
    But you've done something really spectacular here creating original characters that we care about and weaving an interesting plot.

    Things i would love to see from your genius
    1) for you to pursue severus's issues with his father (which you've already promised you would do!) so please do!
    2) i would love to see dumbledore back in the picture and redeemed in severus's eyes and perhaps some fatherly-ness from him. he might even help with sev's real dad
    3) i'd love to see max sleep with greg....this might even drive davy to TRY to sleep with severus for revenge.
    4) you've mentioned this play party thing too often to not do it and it sounds awesome. the scene you wrote where sev and harry were getting it on in front of grant/damon was totally hot. more!!! i doubt harry would feel ready to be so exposed and used in front of strangers but he might consent to having those limits pushed in front of people he trusts. how about a private play party with the cast of characters you have. regardless, i want some exhibitionist sex. please

    amazing amazing job with this
    keep it up

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  • From ANON - Shiva on December 02, 2006
    I'm so relived that Kellie is recovering. Hopefully she won't be out of commission for too long.
    Well, Harry's Thanksgiving experince will certainly be different. o.O The anticipation is so intense. This chapter was well-written as always. Max and Allie... they're not going to last long with the way Max's mindset is going. Personally, I really don't like Allie anyway so ::shrugs::
    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on December 01, 2006
    Loved it can't wait for more. so loved the knock me up saying that was good.
    Glad to hear things are going good for Kelly
    K
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 01, 2006
    this was soooooo good i really liked it
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - spintergp on December 01, 2006
    Wonderful as always. I hope that you are on the mend soon. Take care.
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  • From ANON - HazelWolf on November 28, 2006
    Would you please put bottom!name in the summary or warnings, because I don't read fics in this pairing that don't explicitly state dom!Harry (since they tend towards the other nearly exclusively), so I was just wondering if I'm missing out on something I would enjoy.
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  • From ANON - Lady_tryystania on November 19, 2006
    I normally don't like Sev/Harry, but I say a nice long story and thought i would try it out. Now I love it, and can't wait for more chapters to your story.
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