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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - Jennifer on November 19, 2006
    Well I felt like this chapter came faster. It was a good chapter. I just with there was a bit more harry and serverus. If you can put more of them in the story that would be aweomse! but as of course it is up to you. It is just a suggestion. anyway I look forward to reading the next chapter!

    Jen =)
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  • From ANON - Ladieraie on November 18, 2006
    Wonderful! Mean of you to end it there though...LOL Here I am, sitting here just on the down side of stomach flu and what do I read? Someone throwing up....I DO believe that I have had enough of that in the last few days and DIDN'T need to read about it. UGH! I have been thinking all along that Allies actions have been caused by something from her pregnacy. If she is toxic in some way, it can cause her to act eratic and such. Of course...only time will tell. I plan of giving her a benifit of the doubt and wait and see. Only our esteem writer knows for sure. :)
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  • From ANON - l'etje on November 17, 2006
    wow very very good keep going and post
    soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on November 16, 2006
    thanks for the new chapter loved it as much as the rest. I hope that this is not the start of allie or the baby being lost may not like how she has been acting but would hate for something bad to happen to either of them. To bad Max never worked out his feelings before starting the next relationship hope he can make it into just friends. You can love someone as a friend after being inlove with them if you are a big enough person.
    K.
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  • From ANON - morganlefay1958 on November 16, 2006
    Another fantastic chapter! Pregnancy hormones are absolute hell!! Don't let RL get you guys down and hope everything goes ok!!
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  • From ANON - Briar on November 15, 2006
    OMG I love invisible kool-aid!
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  • From ANON - Shiva on November 15, 2006
    Sweetness, an update!
    Both Harry and Allie get sick on the same day, sheesh, the tension just went about tenfold there; especially concerning that last line about "Max having feelings for Gregory and Gregory having to combat his own feelings for the big Healer". Oh noes, I smell drama in the air! ::smirk::
    Great chapter. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Anitajane on November 15, 2006
    Love the saga and was delighted to see the new chapter. I hope things improve health wise soon.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on November 09, 2006
    update soon please so want to know what is going to happen next.
    K.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on November 06, 2006
    Thanks for the new chapter. I hope your surgery goes well.
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  • From ANON - Ravynsword on November 01, 2006
    I came into this when you were at 108 chapters and have just burned through it to catch up. Your story line is addictive and the characterizations have been well thought out and fit well into the plot line. I am looking forward to seeing what the teaming of Lucius Malfoy and the Weasley Brothers will be up to. I am also interested in where the story line with Max and Allie is headed. Keep up the great work and good luck on the surgery.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on October 27, 2006
    I just love this story! Will be waiting for the next chapter.
    K.
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  • From ANON - Shiva on October 26, 2006
    Yay, an update!
    I'm glad that Davy and Harry were attempting to become friends. Now I'm really interested in Davy's past with Severus. A possible divorce, huh? Well, I was slightly expecting that. Can't say that I'll really mind since Allie has been such a prick of late. Although I would hope that you would have Sarah remain with Max. She is really sweet.
    I hope that everything goes well with your surgery.
    Great job!
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  • From ANON - spintergp on October 26, 2006
    Thank you. Wonderful as always.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2006
    I just finished reading the story. This is the longest fanfic I ever saw. I really liked the story also I had my doubts when I began, I'm not interessted in motorbikes at all. The characters you created yourself seam to be so real becouse you gave so many informations about them.
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