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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From Vyver on January 22, 2006
    I have been obsessed with this story for nearly a week now. Every few hours I come back to reread something. This story is definitely one of the best I've read, the characters may not be the same as in the books, but they have a very real texture to them that just makes the whole deal better. I look forward to future chapters!
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  • From ANON - Philomel on January 22, 2006
    This was beautiful. I admire you for having created a whole world with this fic and I'll make sure to check your LJ comm.
    Damon and Grant are totally cute together, even when fighting. Beautiful love-making down at the creek.
    All those people truly behave like one big family. Sev trying to play Quidditch with cutlery was hilarious, especially when Harry corrected him. Closely followed by Lucius' skinny-dipping.
    Keep going, this was and still is wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    Great story. Didn't mind the change of view, actually enjoyed it. Update.
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  • From ANON - Aureliades on January 21, 2006
    I've been following this story for a long time now and just wanted you to know that this was a great chapter. Yes it was different, but it was nice to get to know some of the people that are so important in sev and Harry's life. I was somewhat confused by Damon and Grant's interaction for parts of it though. Perhaps it's just because this is our first real look at them as a couple, but at times I just didn't get why they were acting like they were. With Sev and Harry we've seen the development of a lot of their relationship so I had a better understanding for why they might be upset with each other. Grant's mood swings were a bit harder to get at first, but by the time I was finished I felt like I knew and understood them a bit better.

    Yeah and all that rambling was just to say that I liked the chapter. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - barbarataku on January 20, 2006
    What a great chapter! I get tired of too much action and like to learn a bit more about the people themselves. This section is so homey that it feels like family and thus making this story more real. I am glad you are finishing this and I am doublely glad that I continued reading about this different lifestyle, at least to me. Hope you are feeling well and that when you end this story you have another inside raring to go. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Emily on January 19, 2006
    I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy reading Hols. The story comes to life so well, I love it , I love it. I also enjoy LJ stories as well.

    I would love to see Sev and Max get together and sing. Have an open mike nite at Cutty's...

    Keep up the fantastic work and thank you for taking the time to write this story.

    Emily
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  • From ANON - Hambares on January 18, 2006
    Someone please give Harry some of the darn biscuits!
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  • From Bakurah on January 18, 2006
    Aw cute^_^
    I like how you focused on Damon and Grant.
    Heh Harry really wanted them biscuits
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2006
    No need to be nervous about the latest chapter! Wonderful as always! For me your OCs are every bit as real and important as Harry and Severus. It's nice to see a bit more of them all! I think you could keep writing forever and I'd keep reading with interest; there are so many characters and their stories to explore in this universe you've created. I definitely liked the 'family Sunday', I'm still smiling now.
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  • From ANON - nightangel on January 17, 2006
    I found the story to very interestiong. I noticed that you had some other terms that where not in the HP books. I was also wondering if you are a witch at all because of the terms you used? Keep it coming I would like to see if they are happy. What about the Malfoys?
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  • From ANON - girlfrommars on January 17, 2006
    loved this newest chapter.. i really like seeing sides to the other couples =)

    Definitly cant wait for more.. i do love this story =)
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  • From ANON - antipyro on January 17, 2006
    That was pure memory stuff!!! Ah, yes, the ups and downs of family life make it all worthwhile.

    I don't mind the change in tactics and although I haven't read the LJ on the back stories, this is a nice touch. It gets me more into the characters as you see them.

    Wonderful entry, thank you.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on January 17, 2006
    Very cute. I didn't mind this chapter at all. It still had bits of Harry and Sev in it. And Grant and Damon are just too cute. I liked it.
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  • From ANON - diane on January 16, 2006
    awwww, that wedding scene was precious.
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  • From ANON - diane on January 16, 2006
    I just wanted to let you know that i absolutely love the way that you have portrayed the characters in this story. I have read many fics where a male becomes pregnant, and its never explained how that is possible. You give us a plausible explanation. (you know you have read too many fanfics when you can say that the idea of male pregnancy is plausible, lol) Also, i love the length, this will keep me busy for a while. lol. I have never heard it referred to as the Lifestyle, but thats probably because i have never been properly educated about it...i love that you have included it in this story. I would love to have someone treat me the way your Severus treats Harry. I have never felt the urge to review a story here before, but i just really wanted to let you know that i think yours is awesome!
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