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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - Akusaa on January 10, 2006
    Wow, what a great chapter! And more on live journal! *faints*

    They're so good. But I must confess you've got me really intrigued by the whole Dom/sub thing. And with Sevvie having lessons on being a Dom in one of your little story things on Lj, I'm really interested!

    How do you know more, and how I can I find out more? lol, much appreciated as it is so INTERESTING!
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  • From ANON - 999Angel on January 08, 2006
    I haven't reviewed this story in a while, but I just wanted to say again how much I enjoy it. You are truly an inspiration to me. I find myself rereading your work when I get stuck with my own story.

    I took the time to read all the cookies and side pieces on the 2 lj's that you have mentioned in your author notes.

    Well done and truly amazing doesn't even begin to cover it. Awesome! You leave me speechless at times. I have been through the entire range of emotions with this work and all the characters in it. I've laughed, cried, and raged right along with our boys and those who care about them.

    Percy Weasley and Cho are still stuck in the back of my mind. Infertility curses on both for even daring to steal Harry's child. Please do something about this plot aspect....in a chapter or a cookie. I have visions of what would happen if Molly somehow found out about what her third son was up to. Ah, the Howler Molly would compose. I have in my mind's eye a picture of Molly writing post to Percy and it becoming a Howler without her consciously turning it into one. "How dare you? You know Harry is as good as my son. Percival Arthur Weasly I am absolutely disgusted....." Sorry about that.. rabid plot bunny took over me for a moment.

    I so enjoy this story. I can never thank you enough for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on January 08, 2006
    I just found this story again since TSS closed, which makes me a very happy girl. I'm terribly in love with this story ;)
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  • From ANON - Anijade on January 08, 2006
    Very enjoyable hope to read more

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  • From ANON - tinkita on January 08, 2006
    Really nice chapter!!!

    tinkita
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on January 07, 2006
    Oh I am so happy you updated!!! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - holli on January 07, 2006
    I was a little disappointed at frist--only because this chapter is short, but then i saw the note about the live journal, and am exstatic about all the wonderful stuff to read there! you truly are amazing. as for this chapter, its super cute. i really like draco helping harry out, and its about time he learned how to cook! :) keep up the good work and thanks for all the extras on lj!!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on January 06, 2006
    I love how you entered the new year on such a high note! You've given Harry and Draco a connection while working in the humanity of parenthood. Can I be you for a bit?

    Sweet...Thank you so much...Talk about an Epiphany!
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  • From ANON - dmalfoy on January 06, 2006
    Wonderful as always. A nice, refreshing interlude between Harry and Draco also. Nice touch.
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  • From ANON - Mimiheart on January 06, 2006
    Awww... Draco/Harry bonding. :D
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  • From ANON - DraykaEmrys on January 06, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this story. I hunted you down here from HP Fandom, because the chapters there weren't enough.

    Just one little question about this...um...didn't Harry learn to cook when he was forced to play House Elf to the Dursleys? What happened to that? Though I know
    JKR only shows him cooking breakfast...but still, it implies that they had him cooking a lot.

    Otherwise, I'm REALLY enjoying this. PLEASE keep updating.
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  • From ANON - lilith on January 06, 2006
    I love your story, but it is impossible that Harry doesn't know how to cook. He made breakfast for the Dursleys since age four after all.
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  • From ANON - Aimsir on January 06, 2006
    I've finally pin-pointed the main problem in your writing: your characters aren't real. They feel artificial and the corner-stone of any story is the characters, as all writers know. I've seen some of your responses to criticism, so I'll go against my usual behaviour and not give any constructive advice. If you want to develop yourself as an author, you'll have to learn how to take negative as well as positive criticism. (Misspelled insults without arguments to back up opinions are another matter altogether.) I have no desire to insult or hurt you, so please don't be offended.

    Aimsir
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  • From on January 06, 2006
    Great chapter :-)
    i've been checking every day, lol...
    i love this story sigh...
    the harry and draco bonding was cute...
    Can't wait for more,
    Chow for now!
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  • From ANON - hAMBARES on January 06, 2006
    I was hoping that it was almosttime for an update! Nice chapter! I love that Harry and Draco are gettinga chance to talk and learn from each other. And Lucius was just to funny. So proper, such a gentleman! ;)
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