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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From chantalmalfoy on March 02, 2009
    Just wanted to let you know that there are still some readers out here who would very much like to read some more of this amazing, wonderful, fabulous, heart-capturing fic. Please. :)
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  • From SeverusBabyMomma on February 26, 2009
    So I love this story I have read it 160 times now I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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  • From cumlover on January 22, 2009
    I adore this story and I cant wait for more.
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  • From HarryVik on December 16, 2008
    I have notice that sometimes in your story your dialogues are very confusing at times. In some place the the person answers to a question or reply on the first thing that is said/asked. But in other place you actually gets it right like in this place in chapter 114.

    "No, if we use magic, it won't taste the same." "I can't wait until we have kids, you know, but it'll mean Gregory will have to take a break from medicine. Do you still fly? I mean obviously not now, but when you aren't pregnant." (Davy)

    And the harry answers.

    "I think that's the first thing I am going to do after I deliver Reganne. Well that and take another ride on Sev's cycle." Harry grinned and then pouted. "I understand; I want it to taste the best. I have to eat something. Would you like a peanut butter and jam sandwich? I need to see if Sev would like something, too."

    Here Harry answers to the last question that left Davy, in my opinion this is how a person usually answers. If you now would do that in the rest of the story.

    Otherwise i love your story, just wish you would hurry up and update.
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  • From love2bug63670 on November 23, 2008
    you know I really love this story, and have been waiting for almost 4 months now for the update. Is everything alright? I really hope to see a new chapter soon, This is the story I have read from almost the beginning.
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  • From cumcuntwhore on November 17, 2008
    i love this story i can't wait to read more of your story mika-chan
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  • From Leentjef on November 11, 2008
    mmm i am waiting for e new chapter
    this is so a good story and i love it but now i am waiting for
    the next chapter please post ssooooooooooooooooooooooooooonn

    bye bye
    a huge fan
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  • From SeverusBabyMomma on October 07, 2008
    this is addiciting and i love it cant wait for the rest of it
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  • From ladyedgecombe on September 13, 2008
    This story is so amazing, I only found it last week and spent all week reading. Of course I was interrupted by work but really enjoyed it. I was wondering what happened to the photo album Draco rescued from Morgan's place. He was so disturbed by the place he had his father obliviate him, did he forget he had it? Also, the presents under the tree. Harry and Severus have become a little complacent if they were not checking the presents for spells and curses as soon as they realized neither of them put the presents under the tree. I really love what you have done with the characters and your new characters are really good too. Can't wait for the next chapter to come up!!!!!
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  • From chantalmalfoy on September 09, 2008
    Yay! Everyone is happy and horny, just the way they should be! :) Richard and Jason are moving in together!!! I can't wait for some more action between those two! :) You guys rock! I hope RL calms down for the two of you sometime soon. :)
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  • From soloflamelady on August 27, 2008
    I am so glad to see a new chapter I am still not ready to forgive allie but I can see that she isn't awful and I am usually the first one to say couple's get divorced to easily so I guess I should give the girl a break. I love that jason is starting to easy up and beginning to trust the family of the heart that is there for the taking for him. Rich and him are just to good together can't wait for tim to get his comeuppence. Grant and Damon why do I have a feeling that they are going to get pregnant anyway and if they do I think it is wonderful they make great parents and they aren't that old considering that they are wizards and all and the deserve that balm of peace. Well enough from me I hope RL eases soon for you though and not just for more updates.
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  • From saffy2yrs on August 27, 2008
    I just read the whole story(taking around 12 hours) during my vacation. I have to say it is a wonderfull story, and very well written. I had to register on AFF just so I could review, even though I don't review often. I loved the story, it made me cry in parts(darn you!), but it also made me giggle in parts :) it also was the type of story that sucks you in and won't let you go, which is why I read it for 12 hours. Keep up the great work, and now I shall be hitting your profile to see what other goodies I can find.
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  • From Leentjef on August 27, 2008
    wow i almost couldn't belief it last night.
    you have posted a new chapter after all those months.
    this chapter was very very sweet and hot, god i am addicted to this story
    but please don't let us, especially me, wait other month.
    i love this story so please keep up the fantastic work and post
    sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
    a huge fan
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  • From Makovaso on August 27, 2008
    great chapter, please update soon.
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  • From Witeblaze on August 26, 2008
    Please, Please, PLEASE! The story is AMAZING and I keep wanting to hold my breath till the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful work. You know if the characters weren't copy-righted I would suggest you publish this. The way you portray the Sub/Dom relationship is exactly the way a good relationship should work. I should know, I'm in one! Very well done!
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