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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - sbkar on December 08, 2005
    Hey, babe! I fixed my computer problems only to have to run to Dad's. I'm still alive.

    Now, the story...*snicker*

    I thought Harry was already showing when they got married in South Dakota? Wouldn't he be even more round? I like the haircut...I too missed Harry! Salt water gargles will help the voice.
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  • From ANON - liza123 on December 06, 2005
    Thank you for the insight to a way of life that is totally foreign to me. I have enjoyed this tale and have read it all, even with the warnings that you have placed. I hope that things will smooth out somewhat for a while and that Harry has no problems with his pregnancy.
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  • From dmalfoy on November 30, 2005
    I can't praise this story enough! Awesome.
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  • From ANON - Natalie on November 30, 2005
    I like it, keep going
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  • From ANON - barbarataku on November 30, 2005
    Hope your a feeling better soon. In regards to this chapter, it is always nice to have a peasant peaceful chapter in between the mind boggleing SEX and the well deserved TORTURE! I can not wait until I see how you are going to deal with daddy dearest.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2005
    I don't usually review but I know you didn't really like this chapter so I thought I'd say I did. I hope you can get better soon!! :) It was well done.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 30, 2005
    Oh, a new twist. I would have thought Ms Velden would have hit on Lucius! But......I think it would be good to get either Draco or Lucius (both would be best) a date. Can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Mimiheart on November 30, 2005
    This chapter was fine. It seems like a needed filler chapter, which we all have to write now and then. *says the girl who hasn't updated in over two months*
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  • From ANON - elementalmoon on November 29, 2005
    great job! i can't wait for the update. until then!
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  • From ANON - sweettee on November 28, 2005
    I just loved the way snape made love to Harry and I loved the way the Malfoy's reacted to
    what they heard it was so cute. please up date soon.
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  • From on November 28, 2005
    Will Sev ever tell Harry about Orion Snape?
    And will he make an appearance once the baby is born?

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  • From ANON - kez on November 28, 2005
    UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on November 27, 2005
    This story is absolutely bloody fantastic!!!! I love it!! The way you have written the characters is great --- keeping some of the canon but making the changes in thier behaviors believable. I've spent 2 days straight reading this story and don't know if I'm disappointed or not that it stops abruptly. I'm happy there will be more to come ---- hoping for soon. Lucky Harry----Severus, denim, leather, long hair and a harley----all in one story!!! A wet dream waiting to happen! Seriously, since you mentioned you were writing based on experience and from people you knew, it's nice to know there are people out there that take care of each other like this (though, the thought of my screen name used for the ultimate bad guy in this didn't thrill me...but it is just a name after all) . Keep it coming! Take care of your hands. I'm an artist and I suffer from carpal tunnel and nerve damage. so I understand.
    *bouncing in anticipation of the next chapters*

    Morgan
    http://www.livejournal.com/users/morganlefay1958
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  • From ANON - Philomel on November 25, 2005
    Hot, absolutely intensively hot.
    And somewhere I pity poor Draco...

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  • From ANON - Philomel on November 24, 2005
    I love how the story develops and that you give the characters that much time to really develop. Sev and Harry are just cute together, the way they care for each other. I especially loved the scene in chapter 87 where they quietly reassure themselves in bed that morning. Looking forward to the Draco-Harry progress.
    I'd love to read everything you've posted already but real life demands attention...
    Keep going, for however long it takes, the story is beautiful.
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