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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - Charlies_Absinthe on November 20, 2005
    i love this story it is my absotlute fav i was wondering if there will ever be a posibility of an original sidestory telling the history of Damon and Grant and how they met Sev. just an avid fans curious wonderings.

    ps i think this story has a wonderful evolution nothing seems rushed it just flows
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 20, 2005
    Oh thank you for geting back to Lucius and Draco at teh end of the chapter. I was hoping to hear their thoughts on Sev and Harry's wild night! Which, by the way, was so hot I squirmed thru most of the chapter. Husband kept shooting me strange looks! Thanx!
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on November 20, 2005
    Loved the chapter!! Yay wanton slutty sub-Harry!!! :) It's great to see him enjoying something like that... there were a few angsty chapters during which I thought he'd never be able to handle something so adventuresome again, since fisting is probably something that his evil-Dom had done to him in a not-so-pleasurable way...

    Anyhoo.... as much as I totally loved this chapter, I'm getting ready for some more angst again! I'm wondering if anybody will hit on Harry when he's serving at the upcoming event at the bar... I'd love to see some butch sexist guy mistake him for a girl (with his long hair) and cop a feel and get in trouble with Sev, or Damon. But maybe our boy is getting a haircut... I suppose it could still work even if they don't mistake him for a girl ;)

    And I'm sooooooooooooooo looking forward to watching the pregnancy progress. I actually read very few mpregs (perhaps because the average quality is nowhere near yours... or maybe just because I was more squeemish before your fic sucked me in and made me open up to the genre...) but I'm really loving the image of a swollen-pregnant-waddling-emotional-and-horny Harry:)
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  • From ANON - cupotrevor on November 19, 2005
    poor draco....he should invest in ear plugs..another wonderful chapter..i do so look forward to seeing more of this amazing story!
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  • From ANON - sheila on November 19, 2005
    Ohhh poor Draco needs ear plugs! Great job as always!!! Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - SevAddict on November 19, 2005
    OMG.........that was soooooo hot......very well written and stayed in the context of everything you have taken time to build, the established relationship, the wild sex, the weird sex, the need harry has to be filled to busting (as in an earlier chapter with the inflatable plug!).....i am so excited that you did that scene as almost no writer will approach it but will do just about anything else......one question.....when do we get to see the toys that harry made?
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  • From on November 19, 2005
    That was hot as hell, and then end was funny...
    I seriously can not wait for more
    Chow for now!
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  • From ANON - MysticSong on November 19, 2005
    YOU are FABULOUS!! :)
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  • From ANON - Threesisters on November 19, 2005
    That was so hot!! Absolutely brilliant. It's my favourite story and it just gets better.
    It was so hot, it's 10.30 pm. I have had half a bottle of red, (good red) have seen
    the GOF and now your story. I think I will go and grab hubby for a energetic night.

    Best wishes, hope your hands are better,
    Threesisters, Eileen.
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  • From ANON - sando on November 19, 2005
    Loved it. That scence was HOT!!!
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on November 19, 2005
    *Rolling around on her bed cracking up with laughter* Oh... OH MY GODS THAT WAS HILLARIOUS! Poor pooor Malfoys. XD Should Gwampa help daddy with the celibacy issue? LOL
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  • From ANON - Mimiheart on November 19, 2005
    Oh. Dear. G-d! I'm SO glad that 2/3 of my children are at their aunts.... *pants*
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  • From ANON - Yami no Ite on November 17, 2005
    So I tried to review this a while ago while on my handheld, but it ate the post, and I was too tired to do it over again. Then I forgot, and then TSS went down and yeah. Anywhoo.

    It actually took me a while to start reading this story. Cause I was like, Snape, on a motorcycle, whatever. But then I finally went ahead and was like, what the heck lets read it and see what its like. And its good. I really do like it. I also like the fact that I know it will go on for so long, cause I find it annoying how sometimes some stories would be so much better if only they would continue past the point they were ended at. It is also interesting to see how the lifstyle they are living is written. As you said in one chapter, there are so many stories out there that are written with this sort of relationship, that give people the wrong idea, and I think that its good that you can write how things really are. Not that it is a lifestyle that I would choose, but it is interesting to see how it works.

    So yeah. I think that this is a really good story, keep writing it, and I shall work on catching up on it real quick. I'm actually back in chapter 75 or so.
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  • From ANON - kez on November 15, 2005
    excellent wonderful more please!! lots lots more
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  • From ANON - starwest on November 14, 2005
    hey! i'm really enjoying this story (and have been for a while) i don't usually review unless it's to critique, but reading this chapter i was struck by a thought - are damon and grant going to really adopt severus in this fic? i'm actually an adoption clerk in a county court in pennsylvania and just today i processed an adult adoption. and reading this chapter it just really struck me how much like family they really are, so why shouldn't they make it offical? they probably couldn't until after sev's cleared to live here, but i think it would make sense for them to at least offer, or maybe for the laywer ckick to bring up.
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