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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - anne on September 20, 2005
    I just love your story. Can you believe that I look every day just to see if there is an update?

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  • From Bakurah on September 20, 2005
    Its about time I finished reading this fic Its taken me a week ta read! heh heh
    I love the whole motorcycle thing thats different and Sev is all relaxed and happy. I like Sevs friends.
    Oh good looks like Ron is gonna be supportive last few fics I read he was a bastard. Heh Cows!
    Heh I wonder how many children they will have. Aww Doggies! they should get a horse or a piggy! Coool there gonna live is West Virginia my mom is from there I'm from Virginia though. Haven't been ta West Virginia in a few years be nice ta go back there and visit my great Aunt and its been awhile since I been ta the mountains maybe I'll get my parents ta go this summer.
    Morgan is a bastard! Hurting Harry and even threatening Lucius granddaughter shoot there would be no wands for me I'd go in there and kick his ass muggle style!!
    Heh I love this story and now that I'm all caught up I can read when ya add more^_^ Longest fic I've even read! Okay I think I've talk enough heh Laters! Cows Moooo! heh
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  • From ANON - Kath on September 20, 2005
    This story is fantastic hope you will update soon as I cannot wait and would it be possible to do 2 chapters at a time as I am really hooked on this story.
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on September 20, 2005
    amazing update... simply amazing.... update again soon...
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  • From ANON - lilith on September 20, 2005
    Hi,
    I found a tiny mistake in the last chapter. It's the first mistake I found in your whole wonderfull story and I'm quite a nit-picker, so be proud ;-) You wrote Severus wants to use Okklumency to see Harrys memorys. It should be Legilimency. Okklumency is the art to hide your thoughts.
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  • From ANON - PrincessDracona on September 20, 2005
    I see a thank you is in order, you dealt with my last review quite eloquently. I did however expect a much bigger explotion from Harry, or maybe melt down is a better way to put it. But I think you know what I mean and dont want to read another book so I wont say to much here. Anyway thanks again for the chapter, for both topic and getting it up so soon. See ya next chap.
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  • From ANON - Moi on September 20, 2005
    Just one point on Chapter 78: Severus would use Legilimency (looking into the mind), not Occlumency (preventing or defending against Legilimency).
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  • From ANON - antipyro on September 19, 2005
    ......and yet closer comes the fateful chapter(s) that will be Morgan's undoing.....(hear in the background the theme from "Jaws") The audience shudders, anticipating, waiting......not really wanting it to come, but wanting it done.

    Oooooo, picking colours - I agree with Harry, orginal is the way to go, especially for this house. Living out in the country, I can feel for how isolated he'll be, especially not being able to drive. That stream will wash out at least once a year, stranding him with his little car. Get him a 4 X 4 Jeep!

    Just love it, as always.....and yet, I have to wait still more days for some more hp/ss.....(sighs).....
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  • From ANON - Gin on September 19, 2005
    That was wonderful. Thank you so much for the story please update soon. And please don't listen to the few idiots telling you to change how you are writing. I check the story too many times a day. Trust me it is great. I have read it more times that almost anything else and more times than any fan fic.
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  • From ANON - Kat Potter on September 18, 2005
    As always, I triumph. I look forward to reading more. Do we get to see more of what the bastard did to Harry via the pensieve memories or?
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  • From ANON - Akusaa on September 17, 2005
    Don't you just love the word fop? Anyways, as usual a great chapter. Can't wait for that bastard to get what's coming to him!
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  • From ANON - Imortallove9@yahoo.com on September 17, 2005
    Very nice, so sweet. But I do have to tell you that now that I am caught up with the story it is KILLING me to have to wait a week for a new update. But alas I know how ones busy life can be. I do have to ask a favor though, I am going away for 10 days next Thursday so if there is anyway you get to post before that I would just love you forever. Now on with the review, I really liked the last two chapters, the only thing concerning me is isn't Severus worried about Harry finding out what he is planing or going to do. I agree it is more than justified and it actually scares me to see Severus's reaction to seeing what he did to Harry, but everyone knows how "good" Harry is. Deep down he can't justify killing anyone. Aside from that I would think he would be mad that Sev did it behind his back. I can imagine the break down Harry would have if he came face to face with him, and that might be a got scene, but I still wonder, secrets in a relationship like theirs always end up with bad results don't they? What ever your thoughts on this please don't do the, he never finds out thing, cause that is just not right. As sensitive as Harry is he would definatly pick up on the fact that something is going on behind his back, especially when Draco and Lucious show up for a "friendly visit". Plus I would assume trying to keep it a secret would make Sev a little on edge also. So anyway something to think about anyway. Again if you can update sooner, yeah, if not I'll just have to placate myself with Mickey. See ya next chap!
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  • From Weirkat on September 17, 2005
    ~Smiles~ I have to commend you on how quickly you post your chapters. I have to say you are the very 1st person I've ever seen that does it.

    Thank you so much for sharing your delicious story. I look forward to reading each chapter.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on September 15, 2005
    Love the chapter in the Dr.'s office when they listen to the heartbeat. It never seems real until you see the ultrasound or hear the heartbeat - Awesome!

    Every chapter you post, I'm cringing at it to know if this is the one where Morgan will finally get his dues. Ever so slowly and patiently, you're teasing us into believing, this is the one. I can't help think this is where you might add some additional warnings of graphic scenes of whatever.... I shiver just thinking about it. Brutal stuff! but I love reading this, I want justice too. I just hope that because Harry is in a frail state (so underweight) that he won't even get an opportunity to know when Morgan will meet his fate through Severus and/or Lucius, et al.

    Oooooo, post soon.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on September 14, 2005
    Ugh... I can't wait until Severus gets ahold of that sick bastard... (of course, having Lucius and Draco together wouldn't bother me. they are both consenting [gorgeous] adults... lol)
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