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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on August 22, 2005
    I was really just going to glance through the first few chapters here. Now I am hooked! This story has a way of slowly wrapping around you like devil's snare and dragging you in. Thanks to the author.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on August 22, 2005
    Uhh... I'm speechles. Sooo.... yum. My fav. chapter yet. Gods. *shivers*
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  • From ANON - antipyro on August 19, 2005
    What a beautiful sex scene! ...and best of all, no interruptions!

    I'm thinking the boys will be glad they had to come back for a day - lol

    Great, great work and you're working soooo hard now, just to get more chapters out to us.

    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Sire on August 18, 2005
    I love this fic and find myself wanting to read more and more please continue The Sire
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  • From ANON - antipyro on August 16, 2005
    Wonderful recovery from the Officer scene.

    I love it when Severus is 'gobsmacked'! I'm sure he'll never consider Quidditch as just a stupid little game again.

    I guess there's no allowance for Harry's hormones and outbursts so that the normal punishments are applied???

    I was wondering about the retribution on Morgan and Severus maintaining his low key profile. Thanks for putting in that note.

    Hopefully they can get on their way and head to West Virginia the next day. Will Harry's money remain as his, or will it become joint property? Will Severus allow him to wholly buy the house? I would think that the normal married rules would apply.

    Thanks for the excellent chapter, please, please post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Mirie on August 16, 2005
    Hahahaha! I can't wait till that swine morgan gets what he deserves! why'd you end the chapter before the naughty scene!!?
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on August 16, 2005
    Mmm...very 'feel-good' chapter for Harry. And I loved the little spanking. :D Can't wait to see more of Lucius and Draco.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on August 15, 2005
    Oh, Wow! Two whole chapters to read.

    Wouldn't you know it that Sev and Harry would run into more trouble with Officer Byron Ridell. I'm glad you included Sev's past history here and am anxious to see how they manage. Great snarkiness on Harry's part.

    I really like Jo Velden, I can see her as a type of guardian angel of sorts. I can imagine her taking the place of Dumbledore in making things happen - legally or within the scrutiny of the law. Please get back to Luke, I want to know more about him. He seems a relishing dish.

    Interesting aspect of Deatheaters being a terrorist group, not just a gang. The wristband thing - UGH!! trade one mark in for another....I hope it doesn't last long.

    Very interesting twist for our pair of travellers. It keeps the story really fresh and alive, almost like real life, but better. I know you'll get to more darker areas, but that is also RL. Thanks again for writing such a wonderful tale.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on August 13, 2005
    Ah... poor Severus. that sucks.
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  • From ANON - Keliq on August 12, 2005
    You did take a long time to update but the names sev made up made up for it!:)
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  • From ANON - antipyro on August 11, 2005
    Loved Sev's nicknames - They all suite him perfectly - lol!

    ...and the new toy - I'm really glad that Severus liked it.

    Now that they have started to establish more of Harry's parameters, I hope things will settle down. That is until Morgan comes into the picture. I hope Harry doesn't have to deal with that and that Severus and Max will 'take care' of him separately.

    Great read, this chapter. Love to read more, as always.
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  • From ANON - Io on August 11, 2005
    AH! Its so...so...adorable!!! Oh man...I want one. Can I have a Severus? Pwease? O man. I live it. *tears* they're so adorable. So's Harry. He's a cute, cept when he's all not Harry. I love yer story.
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on August 11, 2005
    awwww.... they are so cute together.... :) you make me happy... even with the underlying angst at times.. this story is a light in my day..
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  • From ANON - mirie on August 11, 2005
    That was sucha cute chapter!! I love how you've made Sev and Harry. Good work!!! Update soon
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  • From ANON - antipyro on August 10, 2005
    Excellent, now Harry can ask for what he wants, and not get anymore hurt. The big question is will Severus use it? Although it wouldn't hurt and Harry could use it on him possibly to show how subdued it is, he may have reservations on the implications of seemingly whipping Harry.

    I'm intrigued. This should get quite interesting.

    Please post the next chapter soon.
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