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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - Jeanne on July 22, 2005
    Please, Please, Please post another chapter soon! I wasn't entirely sure how I would feel about this story when I started reading it, but after like 2 chapters, I was totally hooked. Everything is so well put together and makes sense. Yay!!!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on July 21, 2005
    Yay! I can't wait for the wedding! I love Grant's mother! She is so what I expected her to be! :D
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  • From ANON - Katharos on July 21, 2005
    Yay! A wedding! I love weddings. *sigh* I can't wait to see how you do the wedding and what new name Harry will get from Rachel.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 21, 2005
    Great chapter about getting married on the reservation, it should be a lot of fun as should the rituals to be performed.

    I hope Harry isn't too distraught about the suddenness of it all. At least he'll have some help in the massive affair and also gain a family. I hope he feels as welcome as Severus does.

    Yes, I agree about HBP too. The story wasn't there until the last 6 chapters and before that was just a collection of facts/occurrences and fill. Although sad to see him die, it wasn't unexpected. The 'murderer', I believe, had an ulterior motive in doing what he did. Now to find who belongs to those initials......hmmmm
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  • From ANON - BMan on July 21, 2005
    Amen to your feelings on HBP!!
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  • From ANON - Katharos on July 20, 2005
    That's so sad. Their living conditions are horrible. At least they have the potions Sev brings for Rachel to keep them from becoming to terribly ill.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on July 20, 2005
    Who's a pervert? *looks around* LMAO

    I love this fic. Each chapter you add more and more depth and intrest to the story. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Feli on July 20, 2005
    I loved this chapter! I know what you mean about poverty, though; a few years back, I was in Florida and we visited an Indian reservation- I was told that it wasa relatively rich one, but some things still shocked me.
    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 19, 2005
    Wow, 7 chapters!!!! I only read book 6 for three days and look what I missed.

    I'm really glad that Ron has finally figured out the good in Harry and Severus' relationship. It was bound to happen, one way or another, lol.

    The brutality of Orion's actions on Severus seemed to scar the reader in it's comprehension. I can't imagine wanting that much pain rather than touching yourself. I guess it's what we grow up with is what makes us who we are. Eventually, I hope there is a chapter where Orion gets his due, at least in a mention.

    The reservation scene is unfortunately typical, and I'm not lumping all Natives in that group. I can remember visiting a northern Ontario reservation and finding similar squallid conditions, right down to the skinny dogs roaming around, scrounging in their skitterish manner. Almost unreal. Then you see a warm smile from a child and hope is there.

    One thing I didn't see is the crafts for sale by the women and children of the village, laid out on blankets or makeshift tables at the entrance of the reserve. You can usually pick up some beautifully crafted or beaded work.

    I laughed at Harry and Allie bopping with their shades on - cracked me up!

    If you haven't read book 6, don't! It's fairly boring, only coming to life in chapter 24, somewhat depressing in all the collected details and suggested outcomes and I have to read it again to fully understand many nuances I probably missed the first time, before I make up my mind to accept the written outcome. See for yourself....

    Until then, read this, it's much better and happier!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on July 19, 2005
    Severus' father is STILL abusing him?! Oh, I hope Orion gets what's comming to him very very soon.


    Oh, and some more pregnant sex would be good, too. lol
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  • From ANON - J. L. on July 19, 2005
    I really like this story. Do please continue it. Please don't let book 6 ruin your view of Snape. Thank you.

    Always;
    J.L.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 19, 2005
    Awww ... *tickle fight* god that was adorable .. And ickle Won-Won and Sev-Poo getting along, just love it!

    Love it! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Mirie on July 18, 2005
    Another fabulous chapter! I like that way you deal with the abuse issue so tactfully. Grant and Damin are the best!!!! More updates soon!!!
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on July 18, 2005
    Man, this story just always makes me want to get two things I've wanted since I was a child. 1. A Motorcycle, but I can't quite afford one yet. T_T My dad said we could buy ours together someday. 2. A tatoo, but I don't know what I want yet.

    ANYWAYS, lovely story as always. Please write more soon. And I don't care about the details that happened during the sixth book. It's all good.
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  • From ANON - anjel919 on July 18, 2005
    I have sat here reading this for a few hours now. I couldn't seem to stop. To me this is a huge sign of a great story. I do hope you continue this. I love the song titles or verses that are used for the chapter titles. They seem to fit in an odd way.

    Thank you for sharing your experience and knowledge of a subject and lifestyle that most people couldn't imagine. You have a great talent. I can't wait to read about when Harry and Sev get to their new home and the drive in the new truck should be interesting. Dodge Quad's have an amazing amount of room and with cruise control, a whole lot of things can happen while driving...*ahem* not that I would know of course. *blushes*
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