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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From foxracerchick129 on July 18, 2005
    *sniff* God, those last two chapters were precious. Made me cry. Loved it!

    Dont worry, I'll definitaly still read it! Most definitally! - Jessica


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  • From ANON - anjel919 on July 17, 2005
    I feel compelled to comment on this chapter. Normally, I would wait and review the entire thing since I've come in so late in this story.

    I understand about the abuse, abuser and abusee relationship. I may not have seen it in the same venue as you are speaking but I've been party to it for far too long. Rape is another form of abuse in which you are referring. The person that has to pick up the pieces afterward is most likely to have a hard job ahead of them.

    Thank you for writing something so candidly when most are afraid of waht others would think or feel by reading something so honest. I will grudgingly admit that you made me cry by reading this. It brought back some memories I've repressed for far too long. But on a higher note, the abusee can be put back together again. Who knows, depending on who's doing the mending, she or he may even be better off than before the abuse.

    Long winded, I know and I apologize but I felt that you needed to know that your writing has touched someone deeply.
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  • From ANON - BMan on July 17, 2005
    I totally agree with you on the canon issue. I actually take solace in the fact that through fanfiction I can enjoy the characters of JKR regardless of what happens in canon (especaially with the revelations from book 6). I am very in love with this story. May all flamers be burned! =)
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  • From ANON - Katharos on July 17, 2005
    To quote Gwen Stephani, "super kawaii!" I wonder what's going to happen though once Sev and Harry marry? He'll have to tell Harry something then, won't he?
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  • From ANON - Mirie on July 17, 2005
    I loved that chapter! and the two before it of course!! Poor Severus. I agree with you about what you said about canon anf fanon, I will definately keep reading this fiction.
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  • From ANON - Katharos on July 16, 2005
    I think Orion Snape should be punished! Put him in Azkaban! No, wait! VIGILANTE JUSTICE!!!!! Also I think Sev should tell Harry, he coould help Sev just as he help Harry.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 16, 2005
    Wait a minute ... at the end of the chapter. When it said Ron looked at his 'former boyfriend and fiancee' .... does that mean that Harry was his boyfriend at one time? Or just like a boy thats a friend... but former.. like hes not anymore?

    Very touching chapter between Severus Damon and Grant.

    Love it! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on July 16, 2005
    WOW... That was extreme! It definately adds another demension to the fic. I do hope Harry can help Sev. with this problem.
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  • From ANON - Britomartis on July 15, 2005
    *giggles muchly* I LOVE the ending to this chapter! Nicenice. I have been reading but haven't managed to review yet, I don't think. Please don't stop writing this out, I'm LOVING IT!

    ~Bri
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 15, 2005
    That was f****g hilarious! Harry falling asleep! Definately new sensations and nerve endings working overtime there!!! lol

    Your description of their new love making was terrific. I snickered at how Harry informed Severus of the new location to 'touch' and Severus' new methods. I was squirming like you couldn't believe.

    Loved Ron's reactions too, absolutely fantastic. Serves him right! I hope he turns 50 shades of red in the morning when he aplogises to Harry.

    Can't wait to find out what Grant does with Severus....that'll be interesting. I hope Severus can get over his embarrassment.

    Great chapters and bring on what ever you want, I don't expect you to hold back on anything, but the warning was good to know.

    Thanks and post soon.
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  • From ANON - Mirie on July 15, 2005
    Hahahahahahahaha!!! Can you imagine someone you consider your "mother" seeing you with a hard-on ( for boys anyway)! hahahaha another great chapter, keep'em coming!!
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on July 13, 2005
    This story is...awesome. I grew up on Harley's and so it's great to find someone who obviously knows her way around one, as well. I like the way you made the fic about their relationship, not how they got into the relationship in the first place. I like the dom/sub thing. It suits Harry to trust someone so implicably-especially Snape. And although this is a stupid question because by the detail of your story I already know my answer but: I take it you've been to Sturgis a time or ten before? ^.~ Great story...keep up the great work! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Katharos on July 13, 2005
    I can't wait to see how you write what Ron's face looks like when he hears Harry and Sev having passionate hermaphradite sex. lol.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 13, 2005
    Holy Crap I loved the end of the last chapter! Taking down the silencing charms are we? lol

    Lovely, as always
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 13, 2005
    Loved the physical changes in Harry. It's a new perspective I've never read about before - lol - no wonder!!!!

    Great that Hermione is getting Ron to understand but I hope Ron's not too horrified by what he hears tonight - should be a very funny chapter.

    Post soon, I'm waiting.
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