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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - BMan on June 29, 2005
    Please don't stop writing this story. I appreciated the last chapter and I think that it was written very well. I think that the depth of the D/s relationship just adds to the story and is very well written while allowing the reader to really get a feeling for the lifestyle that the characters are following. I look forward wtih anticipation as the story continues.
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  • From ANON - L on June 28, 2005
    I think you did a wonderful job with the latest chapter. And you are all too correct. Besides, it is unrealistic to think that Harry would not have been adversely affected by the treatment he received from his uncle and other nefarious people. I look forward to the next chapter, you have a wonderful way of writing.
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  • From ANON - chaos on June 28, 2005
    Wonderfully written glimpse into the abuse that is often mis-construed by wanna-be Doms. It brought a tear to my eye, but they turned into happy tears when Sev and Max knew just what to say to punish Harry but still lead him to being a better sub. Looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Ulfric of the RiverWind Pack on June 28, 2005
    dont stop posting just for telling it like it is. i like your story alot. but i like your way of writing its like you dont leave out the bad stuff just because its bad... if that makes sense to you. i also like how you post chapters so fast :)
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  • From ANON - look at my ding-a-ling-ling on June 28, 2005
    Awww! How sweet and ROMANTIC!
    It's times like these that i am VERY glad I was born a woman! We can show emotion!!
    Please keep up the good work and update soon (although I dont think we need to worry about that...
    you update so quickly!)

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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 28, 2005
    OH, WOW! I just love the expressions each gave when Severus asked Harry to marry him, the speechlessness, the questions, still the self-doubt lingering, the little voice relating everything going on in their minds, critically off tangent. Just loved it!

    Double Wow, now I've got to keep up with you if you post every day. Remember we still have RL going on and can't afford too much vacation time from our jobs. lol

    The story just gets better and better and now with their new lives ahead of them, Ahhh, just great, really really great!!!

    Post when you can, and I'll read when I can and review when I catch up - lol
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on June 28, 2005
    Really enjoying your story. Love Harry with the children.
    Hope you update soon. Just a great fanfic.
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  • From AkumaKawa on June 27, 2005
    *ahem* In a Texan flare I wish to wish them a happy union marriage life together.

    YEEHAW!!!

    That is all.

    I am soooooo happy for them. Harry is going to be soooooo HAPPY.

    Keep up the wonderful work, Coolsa.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on June 27, 2005
    Wow, loved those two chapters. The scene with Harry and Allie dancing with the kids in the sprinklers was the most adorable little thing, and the way Sev told Harry that he wanted to have kids, and asked him to marry him! Ooh just loved it! Cant Wait for the chapters to come! - Jess
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  • From ANON - L on June 27, 2005
    Fantastic story. I love it. You have managed to create such a wonderful relationship between Harry and Sev. I can't wait for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Mashell on June 27, 2005
    I'm so glad you're writing this story with so much detail on the country they're riding through. My Dad's a biker but since I could never get a regular good ole bike to balance I figure it'd be a bit unsafe for me to take up that lie style. hehehe! I do have to protest though that Missouri is not made up completely of cows, there's lots of horses, hay, and corn fields. I should know I live near St. Louis and often go too columbia. Anyways great fic lots of good Harry/Severus. I hope you give us more to read soon. Toodles -Mashell
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  • From ANON - ScarletTearsOfHope on June 26, 2005
    This is so beautiful and sweet. *sniff*
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  • From ANON - Shaddow on June 26, 2005
    AWWWW! Cute. I really like Severus in this one, and the nickname 'little one' is just plain sweet. Uuuum, please don't think me rude, but are you a male or a female? You don't have to answer if I've offended you.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on June 26, 2005
    I swear this story is just adorable, I was a little iffy about the Sub/Dom relationship at first, but its just so sweet. And I love Grant and Damon, their so cute. Please update soon, I love it! - Jess
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  • From AkumaKawa on June 26, 2005
    *scratches head*

    How to review this story, without seeming rude...

    I guess I will just say that I do love this story.

    It is interesting and I think a very unique story that I have read in the HP fandom.

    I also want to say that I kinda figured that you were into the Livestyle (that is how you say it right?) yourself. Seeing as how there was so much detail into the relationships and how they communicate within the group. How to address each other and so forth.

    I also wonder if maybe you are from the States and participate in the Bike Clubs (is that how it is to be addressed?), seeing as there is so much detail into the stops and regions and the scenery, and so forth.

    I personally never have done anything like that, but my elder brother is very much into it. He goes on the trips when he is not away from home. Being in the military limits the amount of off time that a person can have. When he worked in the subs, he was gone for many months at a time, and since he has been home, divorved, remarried, he has gone on the trips.

    Being as he is 17 years my senior and his eldest son is only a few years younger than me, I only know parts of that life, such as he has a Harley (that is a given) and that he is in a 'bike club' not a gang, that he goes on the long trips, and that is about it.

    Other than that, I think I am happy to know nothing else.

    Ah.... Anyways I love the story, I love how much detail and character development there is within the story and plot.

    I wonder though, is everything with that has to do with the War and Voldemort over and done with?

    Cause won't there be pockets of resistance and new 'dark lords' popping up and making waves?

    And won't the best way to make a name of one's self be to take out Harry Potter 'the boy who lived'?

    Would they if they had informants within the wizarding community know of Severus and Harry's trip?

    And try to make waves, i.e. attack?

    Or is this just a story about the two of them and their relationship and Lifestyle?

    Either way I think this is a great story. Keep up the awesome work, Coolsa.
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