Click Here!

Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From ANON - Irene on June 23, 2005
    this is just badly written, i mean the only part i liked was "Damon would not have to keep such a close eye on him at Sturgis any more, Merlin knew that Severus could always be counted on letting his alligator mouth overloading his Chihuahua ass and then getting said ass pounded into the dirt by some ill-educated bubba that had a hate-on for gays." the rest was just crap. But, alas it seems I am the only one who reviewed with something other than "I love it". Well, hope you at the very least make it more credible.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chaos on June 23, 2005
    More please! I love this side of Sev and Harry ~ reminds me of how I used to wonder what my teachers did in their free time (I mean seriously, teachers having a life! *grin*) now of course, with my hubby being a teacher, I know they have *other* lives outside of school.....

    and of course anything with Severus in leather is a turn on!
    Report Review

  • From foxracerchick129 on June 22, 2005
    Aww I love this! Sev is so sweet to Harry. Ooh and I love Allie, very cute! Cant wait to read more

    Love it! - Jess
    Report Review

  • From ANON - antipyro on June 22, 2005
    Numb bum! lmao

    but Severus is being so loving to Harry, who could refute that?

    This was so nicely written and well too. With all those names, I'm sure to get mixed up somehow, lol.

    Your doing a great job on this fic and the dom/sub relationship just makes it better.

    Update soon.
    Report Review

  • From Laney on June 22, 2005
    I really love the idea of this story and the way that you're handling it. Very sweet and all that good stuff. Please update soon. Maybe work on having the actual text spread out more...possibly double spacing between paragraphs? Just a suggestion, unless you've tried and it's given you troubles...I mean, it's fine reading it as is, but may be a little more comfortable with more spaces. No worries, though ;-)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hambares on June 20, 2005
    What a great idea for a fic! I can see Severus riding thru the countryside with Harry. Doesn't hurt that I love watching all teh bikers ride thru our state every summer on their way to Sturgis. Update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - antipyro on June 20, 2005
    Great idea for a fic, love the Harley relationship too.

    Can one have sex while riding a Harley??? I'm sure we might find out in this story?????? At least when Harry gets off, that tell-tale bulge will draw some attention! lol

    Will they have a breakdown on the road? Will Severus have the mechanical ability to fix whatever it is that needs repairing? Will some 'Bubba' take a liking to Harry and Severus has to save him, yet again?

    Too many directions to take for this one, never mind following I-90 or any side road....lol

    Keep posting, I want to read about Harry and Severus in their riding leathers.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!