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Reviews for How Severus Spends His Summer Hols

By : Nigelsfairymidwife
  • From romanticfae on December 26, 2007
    i just spent 3 days reading your wonderful story and i have thouraghly enjoyed it
    i love how emotional and sweet it is plus of course the hot smex lol
    anyway its great and i cant wait to read more
    sorry i suck at reveiws but its a great story
    tanx 4 sharing
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  • From soloflamelady on December 25, 2007
    oh that was so good and a great christmas gift. I can't wait for the next update but I will real life can suck. I am not leaving this story until you guys do. Have a good holiday
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  • From Leentjef on December 24, 2007
    What the fuck what an ending
    i hop you are ging to past real soon waht i love this fic
    keep up the fantastic work and post ssoooooooooooooooonn
    bye bye
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  • From BurningBlackRose on December 23, 2007
    Oooh, I wonder what it is that is the problem with Damon!
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  • From Leentjef on December 08, 2007
    hey were are you?
    i am waiting on a new post
    please post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    i can't wait anymore

    bye bye

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  • From ladysaturne on November 27, 2007
    hi! have been reading your fic for a while now but never reviewed...was too lazy to register just to say 'love your story! wait for more'. Anyway, I finally kicked myself into it because of your "Grant's problem" plot. The idea was whispering to me for some time and with this chapter I think I know what's going on with Grant. Harry said "I just felt like I needed to have you come inside me. It was this... pressing urge suddenly. Like... like, I had to have it or I was going to combust or something if I didn't feel it rushing inside of me." and didn't Grant say something similar to Damon? Like he couldn't have enought? I think during their "time of the year" Fleymanns have the urge to become pregnant, ergo the need to have sex. I seem to remember that Grant began to have problems after the loss of his last child, and the more time pass the more his hormones go crazy and make him horny.But Damon had a vasectomy after the last miscarriage so he CAN'T have anymore children. Couldn't Grant's body be aware that Damon's come is spermless? and try to make it up by pushing Grant to have more sex in hopes to become "fertilised"? and the more time pass the more he's near menoposis the more urgent it become to be pregnant. I think the problem wouldn't have been so severe or wouldn't even have existed if Damon hadn't be operated and if Grant had taken contraceptives insted. Am I right??

    Well, thanks for reading all my rambling, and good luck in writing the next of this wonderful story (even if I don't like Allie, Max's too wipped for his own good she's always manipulating him I always have the feeling she's laughing evilly in her head)

    Ladysaturne
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  • From mikaela717 on November 17, 2007
    Um, one question: when did Jason get the job at the mortar + pestle?? I must have zoned out or something..Cause I missed it! I've really been enjoying this story, although the Fleymanns thing kinda freaked me out lol...Um...I guess you like Evanescence, huh? Cool *thumbs up* Anyway, update soonish!! :)


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  • From quitedemented on November 12, 2007
    Yet another brilliant chapter, I don't know how you've kept this story going this long and still kept it interesting. You are truly the most gifted fan fiction author I know of. Keep up the utterly fantastic work Hun!
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  • From HPTwin on November 03, 2007
    This is a great story. I hope you can update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From lkm40 on November 02, 2007
    This story gets more and more incredible with every chapter you write. I always look forward to your updates.
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  • From duskstar on November 01, 2007
    wow...I just discovered this and sat down and read this in one go, I got so absorbed I forgot about the time! I'm really impressed with the way you've made your characters interact and I love the dom/sub aspects of the story. I also appreciate your sensitivity in the way you deal with sexual, physical and mental abuse. I went through stuff like that for many years and it's rare to find the after effects dealt with so realistically and so well as you do here. Looking forward to reading more.
    Duskstar :)
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  • From Leentjef on November 01, 2007
    WOW THIS WAS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i REALLY LIKE THE SENES BETWEEN RICH AND JASON
    KEEP GOING AND POST REAL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From willowgirl on October 31, 2007
    I loved the flooger play, very sexy!
    Max and Allie are so sweet together.
    Wonder chapter, as always.
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  • From sarken02 on October 26, 2007
    I just wanted to drop you a note and say that I hope your mother is doing better, and that I hope you will be adding a new chapter soon, as I have been following your story since around chapter 60. I also wanted to tell you that in all of the Harry Potter fanfic I have read, both adult and non, yours is by far the most well written and well developed story and plotline I have encountered.
    Anxiously awaiting your next chapter,
    sarken02
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  • From chantalmalfoy on October 10, 2007
    Aww... what a sweet ending to that chapter!!! I hope your Mom's surgery goes well. Thanks for the update! :) It was very enjoyable. I hope Richard figures out what's wrong with Grant before it gets any worse... Poor Grant.
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