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Reviews for Close Enough

By : myniephoenix
  • From ANON - ME on July 28, 2005
    Some how I missed the last couple of posted chapters when I wrote my last comment! Needless to say, I have two more points of contention. (It's like watching two trains collide, I just can't tear my eyes away from it, even though I want to vomit at what I'm seeing!)

    Point seven; Dumbledore in chapter fifty-eight, come to the hospital wing and confirms that he did indeed encourage the Potter's to change the sex of Harry. Then in chapter 63 you have him coming in asking what was going on, and him being shocked that there had been a student attacked - (have you not even read your own story?)

    Eight; it's Hermione JANE Granger not Hermione Elizabeth Granger, if you can't be bothered to understand the concept of canon, at least do us a favor and go to http://www.hp-lexicon.org/ and check a few facts before you write!

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  • From ANON - Miyu on July 27, 2005
    I am happy to see Draco/Harry moments. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - ME on July 27, 2005
    OK, I've just read this WHOLE FRICK'N THING and I've got a few things to say!

    First off, it's fucking HOGSMEADE - not Hogsmead, if you write a story about another story you should know a little about the first story; like maybe reading the damned thing first.

    Second, RON? Come on, give us a break, he is so OC it's not even funny. And do you really think if he had 'lost it' like that, that Hermione would have allowed herself to be abused? I think not!

    Third, why don't you just suggest to your readers to read Beren's works instead of trying to steal her stuff (you didn't do nearly as well as she does).

    Fourth, if you do have a beta (which you claim you do) get a new one! This one sucks! A beta should catch at least the canon spelling errors, if not the lameness of your story line.

    Fifth, it was probably removed from FF when someone complained because it was written so poorly.

    Sixth and finally, if you are afraid to write about the 'closeness' between our boys, then don't put the story on an Adult fan site, it's an insult to all of us.


    ME
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  • From ANON - BMGray on July 27, 2005
    Excellent as always. I look forward to your next offering.
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  • From ANON - Akusaa on July 27, 2005
    Love the new chapter. Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - kookielips816 on July 27, 2005
    gracias for the tip off chica i enjoyed it it was very mucho! hit me up when you got a new chapter or a new story por favor. gracias
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  • From ANON - TeeDee on July 27, 2005
    Omg! The floor is beneath him, huh? I never would have guessed it. Poor Draco, will he -ever- live this one down? And Harry's choking on his giggles was priceless! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - sbkar on July 27, 2005
    Oh...Harry does have a heart of gold! Too bad Hermione couldn't see that!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on July 27, 2005
    Would tat we could have that spell here, in the real world...
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  • From ANON - Missi on July 27, 2005
    That was really cute-I said the same thing to my husband (who promptly declared me insane and offered to take me to St. Mungo's. He's not origional, but he's sweet). I love this fic, thanks so much for updating!
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  • From ANON - d on July 26, 2005
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  • From ANON - InsideMyWorld on July 26, 2005
    HELLO! That was awesome... I wa slike "Awwww..." through the whole chapter. It was soooo good! I really want you to update soon! I really want you to update soon like now even! That would be extra awesome!


    UPDATE!

    InsideMyWorld
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  • From ANON - Trinity C. Malfoy on July 26, 2005
    Lovely... The Draco's heart-talk was touching, really! But Harry is recovering to much fast, I think... I don't know... all about the touches, the sweet talks and all that how were made to scary him and made him unconfortable... and now it is all ok?! But whatever, I love them together and well! =D
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  • From ANON - darkmoona on July 23, 2005
    Well, it was a long wait but it seems as though everything is starting to come together again, with Granger punished already. I only hope Harry starts feeling better asap, just so he's able to go out of the infarmary and more or less go on with his life . Now we'll have to see how the bond reacts to this horrible fact. Granger was really clever and really cruel, but Draco's punishment is really the worst thing one could think. Update soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Trinity C. Malfoy on July 22, 2005
    I can't believe... I'm astounished... I can't believe that I finally found this fic!!! I was desperate, really, when I couldn't found it in fftion... My favourite fic... And now it is back again! oh yea!!!! Thank Merlin! And it is better than ever! Poor Harry... and porr Draco too... he doesn't seems entire aware about Harry's state and mind... I wished he had see the pensieve, seriously... to witness all that happened with his mate, all the suffer, the angst... But I hope they work to be well together now... I'm waiting for the next chapters! ******* (p.s.- I'm really trying to improve my english ^_^')
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