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Reviews for Close Enough

By : myniephoenix
  • From ANON - Wendy on July 21, 2005
    Dammit I did it again... Reviewed and forgot my name and email. Oh well.... Here yah go. *Hopes you take her heavy hints to heart and use them in your story*
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2005
    *whines* Hurry up and update! I'm following this story like a lovesick puppy... It NEEDS to continue! O_O I wonder if there's a spell to reestablish someone'svirginity...? *HEAVY HINTS* That way Draco can take what's rightfully his. ^^ *Is proud of her GENIUS plan*
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  • From ANON - Larimar on July 21, 2005
    Love the spell punishment Draco used! Just what she deserved!
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  • From ANON - shola on July 21, 2005
    mani hate that bitch man what draco did woh that genuis no she will exprience the pain the cause harry i wish we saw what happen i hope harry and draco can get through this and i hope draco can be patient with harry and take some time
    well this was great cant wait 4 the nexy chapter hope u have a a great day bye shola!!!!!!
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  • From BMGray on July 21, 2005
    OH Yes. Much better than my Apache forebears. That would have been too slow.

    I'm so sorry to hear about the death in your family. I'm just glad you're okay.
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  • From ANON - Missi on July 21, 2005
    I can't wait for Draco to help Harry move past this! Thanks for the update, and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 21, 2005
    Oh I hope it helps! Saw this was only chapter 60 and I've been thinking 63 so I can't wait for chapter 61!
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  • From ANON - Ferfer on July 20, 2005
    Oooohh.. nice punishment! It really fits the crime. I hope the boys will get through this and finally get to bond.
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  • From ANON - InsideMyWorld on July 20, 2005
    OMG! WISKED AWESOME! I loved it! Please update soon! PLEASE! NOW MAYBE!

    UPDATE

    InsideMyWorld
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  • From ANON - elecktra on July 20, 2005
    That was great! And I loved Grangers punishment! Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Miyu on July 20, 2005
    I am glad that she is getting what she deserves. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Crio/bekki on July 19, 2005
    ok i said in anouther review that i hadnt read your story yet, but i would let you know what i thought in a couple of chapters time.. Well im 20 chapters in and this story is so kool!! I love it, but im off to go see my horses now, i need the platonic activity and not romance.. Damn teenage hormones and confussion.. Anyway! You dont really need to here about this so toodles! And keep up with the great story!!
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  • From ANON - Reha on July 18, 2005
    I'm so torn about this fic. I like it, but there are so many mistakes. For one, Cloe wouldn't be a Animagus. You said she was a muggle. And there is no way in hell Hermione would ever do that. Because if she truely was a person like that, she wouldn't have stuck with Harry though everything. She wouldn't have risked her neck for his. And Snape wouldn't have had time for a family, he was a Death Eater right out of school and then as Potions Professor. And I didn't like how Dumbledore said that a boy would be stronger then a girl. Do you really think that? Or is it just a way to stuff a bit of mpreg into the story? And Snape, although he suspects that the Marauder's Map is more then a joke item, wouldn't know how to operate it.

    Other spell and timeline mistakes bothered me and threw me out of the story. Learn to use the books to make sure you have everything right. Not knowing and making it up will make many readers stop and find something else to read. Believe me, I know, I've done it before. Just because the story line is great doesn't mean that, that alone can keep people interested. You must show them that you're a Writer and that you can weave this tale perfectly.

    Anyway, the story is a good start. You could use some grammer lessons, punctuation and such. Like only one exclimation mark is ever needed. One gets the point across. And more then that makes you look silly. But the story, ignoring previously mentioned problems, is a nice one to read. Keep up the good work. No one ever improved by doing nothing. Good luck with future projects.
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  • From ANON - anya on July 17, 2005
    Hi there!

    I've accumulated much admiration towards your competence; it's very much admirable to have a sensible plot line accompanied by romance, implied lemon and an assortment of thingies. Anyways, I've much exposure to similar thingies... Predominantly, others thrive under praise; so do I. I've to express my gratitude cause you provided me with much sought-after and ever-elusive swooning over Draco and Harry's complexity. You're brilliant! I envy you. That aside, could you provide me with the endowment of enlightenment of your reasoning? You're inclined to make Draco an antagonist! Much to my frustration, Draco gets misled! Draco gets upset! Draco gets flustered and distraught! Draco has his shortcomings and misgivings; albeit it'd be helpful if you could lessen all the crap! I suppose I'm overly blunt...

    Anyways, I'm deprived; I spent the latter of an afternoon and evening reading your very lengthy albeit satiating fanfic. I'm concerned bout your aforementioned thingy in your author's note; I don't intend to pry. I've to express my condolence; I too have grieved and mourned.

    Thank You

    ~anya~
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  • From ANON - anon on July 17, 2005
    I have fallen in love with this story. You really have a gift for making someone be able t lose themselves in the characters. I hope you get to update soon and sorry for the family death. Keep up the amazing work!
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