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Reviews for Close Enough

By : myniephoenix
  • From ANON - Jenna on June 27, 2005
    the story was good up untill u let them rape harry- i think u should like let them use a time turner and go bace and save hime before he gets raped..
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  • From ANON - Deans Darling on June 27, 2005
    Powerful! I am so very impressed. You did a wonderful job of dealing with the situation. Draco was perfect. Righteous indignation abounded. Harry loves him very much. I think this is the best chapter to date. Looking forward to the next. Wow!
    DD
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  • From ANON - xalonexalwaysx on June 27, 2005
    Holy...wow. This fic...is just incredible. I...have barely any words. I'm pretty speechless. It's just so awesome. The whole plotline. The details. The emotions...I CRIED! So much during my time reading up until now. Cried and laughed like HELL. There were quite a number of grammatical errors, but nothing that would totally confuse me. I'm pretty big on Vampires and such, so this was definitely a fic I fell in love with. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Blu on June 26, 2005
    Very good hun, and I can't wait to find out what happens next, although it is pretty easy to guess lol. Poor Harry. I feel so bad. That's gotta be an aweful thing to have happen. Makes me feel sad. v.v. Well, I must go, but it's very good and I can't wait for more. Thank you. -blu

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  • From ANON - Cleresta on June 26, 2005
    I want to thank you for reposting this story on AFF. I really enjoy this story and have come to expect the almost everyday updates. I can't believe that you got pulled off of FF.net. Did they say why? there was nothing in your story that warranted being pulled. But that is my personal opinion after all they have self mutalations, other stories that involve rape, and sometumes much wrose. I hope that you keep writing and updating fequently. Thank you for a great story.
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  • From ANON - Lady X on June 26, 2005
    OMG! I love this so much in all its twist and turnie glory. Die Hermione Die!! She knows he isn't truly a strong person and how the hell did she find out without asking Dumbledick? oops i mean Dumbledore. His sex wouldn't have anything to do with his power levels...it might have had to do with which one Voldie picked but not his level of power. I don't trust Dumbledick right now. I have a very bad feeling about him. Why would he tell Hermione that if he didn't know at least some of what she had planned and all? Gret GREAT fic. I love it SOOOOO much. Could you please pleaseplease do me a small favor and e-mail me when you update? I would REALLY appreciate it. Honest ly you are soooooooooo great just as something was being left out for long enough for me to think "hey wait a minuet what happened to that?" you brought it back into play.
    XOXO
    Lady X
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  • From ANON - chickenofpink on June 25, 2005
    ...Wow!

    I can't wait for this to be completed but it's so good that I certainly won't forget to check for updates!
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on June 25, 2005
    hot damn this story is good!!!!! I can't wait till draco opens up a can of whoop ass. Cruel writter putting harry through that i feel so bad for him
    side note your story has given harry some really cool powers and aspects, truely an engaging read though i hope for harry's sake that things will get better for him soon(pretty please)
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  • From Krazy on June 24, 2005
    Oh..my....gosh. I just killed like...two or three days trying to read this whole thing. *rubs eyes* Might I add one suggestion to make it easier to read?

    Double space your paragraphs. It makes it a LOT easier to focus on in the long run...especially for gits like me who haven't picked up ont he story until you've written 58 chapters and they have to read 58 to catch up. :)

    The only other thing I would comment on right now, is watch your paragraphing. I think I noticed a few times that you had two different people speaking in the same paragraph. If not, then the double spacing makes this much easier to understand. :)

    One question/ponderment though. I thought Cloe was human and Cord was Vampire, yes? Then how is Cloe an animagus? I was under the initial impression that none of the group were witches or wizards, but simply understood how things sort of worked. Rather, I understood Cord being a witch due to Severus being her dad and all...maybe I'm just tired. It was confusing though as none of them went to school by the sounds of it really.

    And omfg you totally caught me off guard with Hermoine, but that is such a good plot twist. Harry was supposed to be a girl, but a girl "isn't powerful enough" so now she's provign a girl's power. She's the new Dark Mistress...or Lord...ress? Totally didn't think Dean and Sean and Justin were in it either. I thought it was weird how Ron was acting at first, but it was so implanted properly that I didn't even think that it was anyone else with the Imperius--especially now 'Moine.

    Wow. Oh, one other thing I think I noticed, was your punctuations can be off sometimes. I believe I saw it more at the end of talking where it would be simply "Hi how are you" type of thing. So, just watch that a bit as well. But bloody brilliant I say. ^_^

    *~* K *~*
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  • From ANON - Laura on June 24, 2005
    I love this story. Makes you want to laugh and cry at the same time. However the past couple chapters have me wanting to throttle certain someones. Can't wait for the update. ~Laura
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  • From ANON - shola on June 24, 2005
    hey this was great hope harry will get through this hope hermine that bitch died a most painful death cant wait 4 the next chapter i was wondering whenu were going to update an fanfic but then it says now story there so i gues u move hope u have a great day bye shola!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fae Moon on June 24, 2005
    Could this situation get any worse? I guess Harry and Draco will have to learn to deal with the consequences of this attack. This is sad. I was really looking forward to their first loving encounter. Only advanced knowledge and a time turner could undo this visciousness.
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  • From ANON - emerald raven on June 24, 2005
    awww cute lil kitty harry =^.^= ugh dumbledor is such an old fart, fancy changing the sex of an unborn child...twunt!
    this was a great update darlin, can't wait for more - as always lol - can't wait til draco gets his hands on the bastards that did the deed - especially that fookin hermione!

    luv ya

    emerald raven
    x x x
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  • From ANON - elecktra on June 24, 2005
    That was a great chapter! update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on June 24, 2005
    BASTARD ALBUS DUMBLEDORE!!! Hate him but yer great update, please update again soon!!!!!!!!!

    *Eowyns elixure
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