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Reviews for Close Enough

By : myniephoenix
  • From ANON - Kath on June 24, 2005
    Brilliant story cannot wait for your updates
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  • From ANON - B. M. Gray on June 24, 2005
    Great work! The old man is a twinkle-eyed menace that needs to be put down. He'll probably want to let Hermione get away with this because she's a gryffindore. Just ask if you want those torture ideas. I'm sure I can find several that I've not heard of even from part of my more violent family.

    B
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  • From ANON - darkmoona on June 24, 2005
    so it's dangerous to chage the sex of the bay before he's born?? What kind of damage can it bring? Psicological? physical? Would you mind being more expecific next chapter ? I'm kind of interested.... Good chapter, btw, update ASAP, please.
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  • From ANON - Wizzel on June 24, 2005
    If I were in your story's world right now I'd kill Albus. As such, I'm admiring the control Harry's friends show.

    Did I mention I love your story yet? No? Well then: I LOVE YOUR STORY! You're a marvellous writer!

    Thanks a lot for updating so soon and sending me an e-mail about the update!

    Love
    Wiz
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  • From ANON - Missi on June 24, 2005
    Asshole Albus!! I loved this update and can't wait for the next! Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on June 24, 2005
    I'm leaving my e-mail on here, because I'm willing to let you come after me, after you read this review.

    First off, I want to say that I intended to be coming to you praising and happy, but I... don't really know what to say after reading the "rape" chapter. I can honestly say I have never been more dissappointed in a fic than I am now. I loved this fic, I was so happy to be reading it and I was excited that I had found it. I just loved everything about it. I was even quite upset that it hadn't gotten more reviews. But now I can kind of see why.

    You had developed Harry and Draco's relationship so wonderfully and it was prefect--there was absolutely NO NEED to bring that rape scene in. That just absolutely destroyed the entire fic for me. I've never, in my entire 8 years of reading and writing fics, written something like this to another artist/author, or felt this way about a fic, but I just had to voice my feelings on it, because it was so devastating to me. I cannot finish the fic now, and that is upsetting in and of itself. You could have done perfectly fine and gotten your point across WITHOUT having Harry get raped. But I think it's a little late for that now.

    I wish you better writing from now on. And you may get more reviews if you actually spaced the writing into paragraphs--it's just easier to read.
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  • From ANON - Katy on June 24, 2005
    You have really out done yourself with this twist! I never saw it coming and I am taken aback by Hermione's actions towards Harry and Ron. This only gets better as it goes on and I don't see how there could be a end in sight, but that could just be because I don't want there to be an end! Awesome Chapter Awesome Story! Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Miyu on June 23, 2005
    So they do not know what reallt happend to Harry. It took me a few chapters to confirm that. But what about Draco? Did he not smell it? Or did he think it was someone else. But I thought he would have known since he his his mate and all. Hmm..well please update again sometime.
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  • From ANON - Nony on June 23, 2005
    Quite honestly, I spend most of the day checking to see if you've updated. :( You're a bad distraction when I'm... "working". Update soon, so then I can read a new chapter and then get back to work (or rather...start it....)!
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  • From ANON - Heather on June 23, 2005
    Yippee - new chapter!!!! I'm a bit confused, though, on Dumbledore's behaviour - he's all like, "Oh, Harry was attacked? Oh poo. Lemon drop anyone?" Perhaps it might be a good idea to start re-reading from beginning... (yes, brilliant idea!) I'm also a bit miffed about the lack of action on everyone's part about finding the perpetrators - after all, Harry's already implicated Granger. And as for dear Hermione, I hope something dastardly and extremely painful is coming around the bend - for her and the tossers who participated. I await anxiously for another chappie, dear author.

    Great job!
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  • From ANON - InsideMyWorld on June 23, 2005
    That was REALLY good! I can't wait for more! I really do love it! I swear!

    UPDATE NOW!

    InsideMyWorld
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  • From ANON - Deans Darling on June 23, 2005
    Napping? They are napping? Nauhhh. I want Hermione's head on a platter. She needs to be boiled in her own pudding. She needs to die a slow and painful death. She needs to get caught before she leaves Hogwarts as I am sure she is doing as we sit here discussing napping! His pack needs to go on a witch hunt. Draco needs to go berserk. Ron needs to be brought out of Azkaban! (pant, pant, pant, pant).
    Ok, I'm better now. Nice job mynie. Anxiously awaiting the next installment. (Gives author giant puppy dog eyes. Or maybe I should say giant cat eyes)
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 23, 2005
    Chapter 58 review: I have to wonder ~ Harry said Hermione was there before the attack, so,
    why isn't anyone asking _her_ or practicing legilemens on her? And, given that Harry was bathed
    in the scent of his attackers, why can't Cloe or even Snape and his daughter, smell them?
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  • From BMGray on June 23, 2005
    Perhaps it is the fact that I'm part Irish and part Apache and Cherokee, but I'm of the opinion I could give you a couple of good ideas for torture of Hermione. Of course a couple of other friends of mine have some good ideas as well, they're Norse Heathens.

    You really have a knack for this type of fiction. Please let me know when you update. Since you've also read MY fic and reviewed, if you have any suggestions of where to take the story please I would be honored.

    B. M. Gray
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  • From ANON - osem on June 23, 2005
    Nice story so far ( am a complete sucker for mating fics) but something seems off with the sentence structure/something/grammer. Perhaps a beta would be useful.
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