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By : Locke
  • From ANON - tessa3 on July 09, 2005
    Sweet mother of merlin... DAMN COLIN
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  • From ANON - sbkar on July 09, 2005
    Poor Colin...that was a masterful stroke making him an assassin...
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 09, 2005
    Actually, of all the people in Gryffindor, I bet Colin would make an excellent assasin. Good Job. I need to go to bed if I'm handing out praise like you're five years old. LOL
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  • From ANON - Aisling on July 09, 2005
    Great chapter! poor Colin!!! Ok, i have no idea LOL if it wasnt for me imagining things i could have gessed right!! :( LOL :P more soon cya xxx
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  • From ANON - EmeraldEnchantress on July 07, 2005
    Hi!

    I just found this story, and I must say that I love it! I love stories that center around magical bonds! I really like the dynamic that you have created between Harry and Draco. I like that they haven't fallen completely and totally in love just because of their bond!

    I like the twists that you have created involving Colin! Both with the whole Lucius thing, and with him knowing 'darker' curses and spells, you could say! I also really like Io, which is saying something, as I usually don't like OC's very much! And he is with Severus, which I am happy about, because I like our cranky Potions Master!

    So, are Harry and Draco going to bond soon? Now that Snape's theory has come to life, it would seem that they would have to fairly soon. Do you know how long this story is? Harry is going to top, right? At least for the first time? I mean, I like it when they take turns, but I really do enjoy reading about Dom or top!Harry and bottom or submissive!Draco, more than the other way around. I just think that Draco has the whole 'topping from the bottom' thing down.

    Anyhoo, I can't wait until you update, what with that cliffie and everything! And sorry if this made absolutely no sense at all, as I had taken some allergy medicine earlier, which always zonks me out! It is just this story is so good that I just had to review! Anyway, see you later!
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  • From RissSta on July 07, 2005
    yes thank you! (but i am now hooked and need my fix, so hurry up...no pressure though)
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on July 07, 2005
    *Blinks* goodness.... ya know i was sittin here reading and reading and nodding and commenting when a thought hit me...How in the HELL did Colin get to Hogwarts and its suppose to be summer vacation?? then i kept on reading and you gave an answer to my question... *snorts* damn never crossed my mind until now that colin was in th epicture out of no where *snorts* oh yeah.. and colin using dark curses *blinks* scary ne?.... hmm what else *taps brain* is Io going to regain his memories or will he stay like that forever blocking the horrifying years of his life.. and what is up with Big BRO.. Ethan is it?? He's a twisted Ethereal..really reallly twisted.. *sighs* i wonder what of Har's magic? *sighs* so many questions so little time.. anyhoo...Love the chappie until next time toodlles
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  • From ANON - Aisling on July 07, 2005
    LOl if Lucius is on there as well, i'll take the camera forcfully :P LOL ;) ayhow.. Bellatrix? no she's dead...mmm... i dont know! Id say Narcissa but she's dead too and a good guy LOL :P mmm... i cant think of anyone.... :S o well. i can not know today.. (just this once :P) cya huni more soon xxx
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  • From ANON - sharon on July 07, 2005
    You're use of crude swear words have truly lost their surprise. The reason that you don't update means little to me only that you do. You taking my opinion and making it personal by being defensive of the overused authors notes is really a waste of time. The fact of the matter is that too much personal information on many of the stories is a waste of time because if we skipped them the story would still happen, try it, just read a few stories and don't read the a/ns and see if it really makes a bit of difference. The only time that I find myself looking for the a/s are when something goes really wrong and I find that I am looking for a logical explanation and usually the author will give me that heads up that I need for things to flow once again. I also find that when the author remarks seldom that I always take the time to check it out because I know that it must really be important. No need to be pricky or to take this opinion as personal, its just really a strenghtening of the word that makes me know that I can really respect the authors notes because they become used for really important comments that will not waste either of our time.
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  • From ANON - fraser on July 07, 2005
    more please?
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 07, 2005
    Harry and Draco are getting in a bit over their heads, yes? Lucius and Severus need to use their experience to keep them channeled. Can Bella survive the 4 of them using Reucto on her? Is now a good time to tell you that I am obsessed with your story? Have a good night.
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  • From RissSta on July 06, 2005
    please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - sharon on July 06, 2005
    I am most pleased that you are defending your right to use your imagination in your story. I don't know, but I like to think that if I could find a story format that I was excited about writing I sincerely doubt that I would write much in the authors notes. I would not want my readers to be distracted by my personality and what it took to write it on my part, and what my schedule is like this week, prattle, prattle, prattle, and not the world of magic and the works of Harry Potter that we are so looking for. Thanks for the listen. Please know that I am begged hartily whenever I read a fic to review, so I take time out of my reading time mind you, and try to tell you what I see and I can tell you it does not come from a mean place. I do give some wonderful reviews and I try to not hand those out readily so that when that does happen, then a writer can truly know that they came out with some original and just mind remembering that I just had to comment upon it.
    Have a good one
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  • From ANON - Loki on July 06, 2005
    I don't wanna be patient! I want blood, guts and gore. And more fire. Nah, it's all good. Draco's new ability is certainly unexpected...as is Io's memory switch. And wtf? Lucius and Colin? Wow, you get extra cookies for sheer originality. Of course, this is me assuming that's what you had in mind. The Sirius/Remus smut was cute, I can't wait for the Harry/Draco one. *Chibi eyes* I hope it comes soon!

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on July 06, 2005
    ROCK THE FUCK ON!!!! Sev had that coming... no really... i was wonering when someone was going to lay into Sev words work but damnit fists work well also... anyhoo...love it.. absolutely love it m'dere (my dear)
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