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By : Locke
  • From ANON - elecktra on June 25, 2005
    That was great!! I'm so liking this story!! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 25, 2005
    Chapter four review: Well...we were _almost_ one cousin Dudley less!!! LOL
    But, in the end, it's Harry's humanity that is the saving grace...

    That and the bruises and toaster that Moldy Voldie woke up with!!!

    Nice way to highlight the Ethereal powers...Now...Where, oh where, will
    Harry and Io end up? How will they stay out of Dumbledore's grasp until
    school starts? Will Io ever get rid of the collar? Will we be meeting more
    Ethereals?

    And, thanks for nod! So far, I love waking up in the wee hours of the night,
    and having such a good story to look forward to!
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  • From ANON - Aisling on June 25, 2005
    LOOL 'huni' is a term of enderment, lol liek if i called u babe, or sweetie.. :D :D (honey) anyhow.. hahah toaster!!! LOl :D :D more soon cya later xx
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on June 25, 2005
    *taps foot* Well... update faster! lol Or.. uhm, or I'll do something really horrible! Like tie a sock around Draco's throat and hang him with it!! (see! I'm taking drastic, disturbing measures to ensure you update!) ^_^ Great job!
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  • From ANON - Loki on June 25, 2005
    Not bad! When do I get more? And in regards to Dumbledore - set fire to his beard for me. But a chainsaw'll do!

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - moopie on June 25, 2005
    Motion City Soundtrack is a GREAT band... LOVE the story so far...
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  • From ANON - Boni on June 25, 2005
    wow thats a really awesome story, and the last bit of the chapter about voldemort made me laugh outloud, please update this as soon as possible, i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on June 24, 2005
    tes: *eye twitches* HEY u cannot under NO circumstances have Luc..I won him fair and square

    Luc: (twitches, glares) WOMAN.... if GB wants me... i will gladly go ... (pleads)

    GB: *grins evilly, glances at hiding spot of whip*

    Tess: *huffs* FINE!!!Review: O.O WT Holy FUCK!!!! PERCY, Fudge and DOLORES!!!! HOLY SHIT!!! THat i was not fuckiun expecting.. hot damn... and Io now belongs to Har *blinks* life really sucks for Har doesn't it...and Drac.. i guess i drew my conclusions wrong on him

    Luc: no fuckin kidding (muttering)

    tess: *glares* anyhoo... i like this fic.. not to mention i like Io.. but i want to wnow more.. i can't wait to see where you take this bad boy.. they are on the KB so they must be heading to the LC or back to Surrey... i really don'tknow.. but *giggles* love the story... but i have to go now.. gotta work tonite

    Luc: (dances) YES!!!
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on June 24, 2005
    OoO! This is interesting! Update! Update!
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  • From ANON - sharon on June 24, 2005
    Thank you for what looks to be a great action packed story.
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  • From ANON - Nony on June 24, 2005
    *waits in anticipation*
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 24, 2005
    Nice job giving some insight into the Ethereal, Io.

    And, to reintroduce us to the ever detestable Dolores Umbridge and Percy Weasley, along with the scum, Cornelius Fudge...
    well, I do like how you handled them! But, will Draco find Harry before the three nasties and the Aurors do????

    Harry's new powers are manifesting quite nicely, too! I'd really like Dolores to get her own scars in retribution...Any way you can do that???
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  • From ANON - Aisling on June 24, 2005
    wow great fiction huni :D :D LOL poor Draco!!! more soon cya xx
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  • From myniephoenix on June 24, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG.... harry is so going to freak out.... *giggles* this is going to be greeat!
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  • From ANON - Loki on June 24, 2005
    Woah - this is great! Hurry up and write chapter 4! *Giggles* And promise me Dumbledore'll get his comeuppance. Fantastic story!

    ~Loki
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