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By : Locke
  • From ANON - Lili on June 23, 2005
    Please continue, it really is interesting, all with Harry being powerful and stuff! Go Harry! xD
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  • From ANON - Slytherinsbitch on June 23, 2005
    Abso-fuckin-lotely awesome!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!! I will go mad and start cursing people if you don't!!!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 23, 2005
    Chapter 2 review: The scene in Dumbledore's office was a hard read; kind of jumpy.
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on June 23, 2005
    *thinking, taps brain* hmmm , u want some CC huh?? *taps chin, rubs index finger over bottum lip* well...i honestly can't give you any at this moment because *shrugs* there is only 2 chapters... even though there is much you can get from just 2 chapters... *shrugs again* its pretty cut and dry.. its moving along nicely.. you have an aura of *waves hands around* mystery.. u mention the Veil?? and that got me thinking.. hmmm?? so what tis be Harry?? and who is Io?? *nodding*

    Luc: Get to the Chase WOMAN!!!

    Tes: *glares* anyways...it's a good story... cliffies are evil like Lucy here (Luc twitches) but this isn't about him.. its about this chapter.. and frankly I like it... i want to know more about Io and his master.. apparently.. Io's master has been using him for sexual exploits no? and Draco's Har's mate?? LOL... poor Drac can't handle it...lol... poor harry *shakes head* anyhoo.. good so far... i will wait till at least 2 more chapters posted..then we will get down to the nitty gritty cause that's when you have to keep the BALL rolling...MWUHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH

    Luc: (twitches) evil bitch of a woman

    tes: *snaps fingers, waters falls on Luc, takes off running while laughing*
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  • From ANON - Chloe\' on June 23, 2005
    I'm starting to think I should make an account so I can review properly. ^^; Anyway this story has me intrigued, I really want to read the next chapter. That thing with Draco not feeling Harry's inheritance was a nice teaser. Write more soon.
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on June 23, 2005
    Oh you have got to be fuckin kidding me... that's the ONLY CHAPTER???? *flops into chair* WELL DAMN!!!! *huffs* damn!!! *huffs* That was a damn GOOD START!!! You have to post again *huffs, mutters about evil cliff writers*
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  • From ANON - Alexa on June 23, 2005
    You got my interest! Now just update soon! It's so difficult with interesting stories - you just want to read what comes next, but you have to wait for an update...
    So, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 23, 2005
    Caught my attention!!!!
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