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Reviews for Crimson Regret

By : CrimsonRegret
  • From ANON - Angie/les on July 15, 2005
    I dunno, just the first time that he was explained it reminded me of jeepers creepers. LOL. It was quite an interesting thought. Well update soon. That was a really good chapter.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 15, 2005
    Ooh another lovely chapter! Love possessive, protector Snape, oddly cute. lol . Poor Dean though, not that i really wanted him to go out with Harry, ooh whatever. I confuse myself too much . Ooh and the part about Harry 'snuggling' into Severus' robes *SQUEE!!* it was so adorable! Just want to huggle both of them. lol, never thought id want to huggle a vampire, but Severus is too lovely not too.

    Love it as always! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Smilie on July 15, 2005
    hey i like this chapter scrap that i love this story i want more please please please thank you
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  • From ANON - icestar on July 14, 2005
    XP :falls over laughing: go over reaction. loved snape in that. ^_^

    more? onegai? :chibi eyes:

    :thumbs up:
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  • From ANON - Missi on July 14, 2005
    I'd think, since Hermione already knows about both Snape and Harry, Sev'd ask her for her help. Maybe that's just me. Plus, that way, she could help keep "poachers" away. oh, and by the way, I burnt dinner dancing around singing "Dumbledore got his, cause he's an idiot". So now I'm eating Wendy's, which is better, anyway. Cause this update rocked and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - velze on July 14, 2005
    Great story, but this latest chapter seems to have some major errors. Firstly, since Hogwarts is a castle, there wouldn't be any plaster in the ceiling of Dumbledore's office. His office is made of stone like the rest of the castle unless you describe it as otherwise (which you didn't, so I can only assume you forgot where this was taking place). And did I miss something at the end there? I was rather tired by then, but I didn't see the transition from the Great Hall to the dungeons when Dean was going to ask Harry out. If they were in the dungeons, then how and when and why did Dumbledore follow everyone down there? If they were in the Great Hall, then why did it seem as if they were just outside the Potions class? Well, aside from that, it's doing really well. I particularly love the submissive Harry and possessive Snape. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on July 14, 2005
    "Turning he realised he was still keeping a tight hold of Harry and held back a smile when he saw the boy burying his face in his robes and making contented little noises with his eyes closed."
    That was so sweet! I can just see Harry snuggling into Severus.
    You, my daer, must be one heck of a perfectionist. You write very well. Your sentence structure is wonderful. Little if any grammatical errors. Your writing is a pleasure to read. Dumbledore seems a bit odd, but when doesn't he? I love this fic!
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  • From ANON - PirateDucky on July 14, 2005
    Hey! First time reading through what you have so far and it's brilliant! At first, I was thinking Harry was some sort of submissive succumbus with how everything was being played out, but that just shows how grand my guessing capabilities are. Were Cupidos your invention or were they already mystical creatures? I think I've heard the word somewhere, but for the life of me I can't remember where.
    Anyway, I'm rambling. Excellant job and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - z on July 14, 2005
    I just lost posessive Serevus. Makes me happy. lol. I truely enjoyed this chapter!
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  • From ANON - Katie K on July 14, 2005
    Ooh! I can't wait for the next chapter! I am in love with this story!!!
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  • From ANON - silverlook on July 14, 2005
    I think the way snape is so agressive to dumbeldore is little ooc....one of sanpes storngest ties is to dumbeldore, he will never hurt him. call him manipiulative, yes, but crushing him to the wall over such a thing, and the way he speaks-not.... but this is the only bad thing I can find yet^^ good writing. original idea, this makes it one of my favorite snarrys.....sorry for the spelling...english is not my native.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 14, 2005
    Nope, nothing wrong with Harry snuggling into Severus' robes, no, nothing at all! The protection, the yearning, the want and desire all came through rather nicely.

    Now, to clarify, yes, we all want sex, but here, smut will definately do. It all depends on what 'em-PHAS-is' you put on what 'syl-LA-ble', so to speak. lol

    O.k., can Dumbledore really hold back Severus when he's at full strength. That could be a show.

    Loved it, but I read through it toooo fast, so you must try and make it longer. The part about Neville was funny, 'thought you were going to hit him' lmao! What a great coverup!!!

    as always, please post soon
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  • From ANON - sbkar on July 14, 2005
    The timing, the cadence, of the story feels a bit off, rushed.

    Now, my comments on the conniving note-taking headmaster called Albus (who should be busted!) who gets into everybody's business!
    He is _damn cruel_!!!! I was waiting for Severus to bite...In fact, I was cheering for it!!!
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  • From ANON - ladynight on July 14, 2005
    I think dumbldor is completely blind to what is really going on with sev....hopefully no one else tries to come on to harry...although it would be funny to see what sev would do to draco if he made a pass at harry lol. can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - PJ on July 14, 2005
    Ah man you just love to torture us don't you? LOL great chapter poor Sev unable to claim Harry right away. I hop Hermione doesn't figure things out and open her mouth and say something before Sev can win Harry over.Sometimes she can be "too smart" for her own good. Update soon.
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