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Reviews for Crimson Regret

By : CrimsonRegret
  • From ANON - ChasteBlush on November 30, 2005
    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    Can not believe you finished there, how could you, what of Harry, poor darling Harry, probably dieing under that rubble, poor poor boy, so innocent, so loved.
    Brillaint the way you turned love against Voldemort though, i liked that, such a simple answer to something thats been such a problem, really turns the whole afraid of Voldy thing on its head. ~Thank goodness you got that child to safety, Harry would have been so upset and i would have been too. Severus and Lupin killed Draco, how could you, poor Draco, poor poor misguided boy.
    Then theresthe school, completly destoryed and so quickly, so many people trapped inside the rubble, so manmy people dead or dieing, so much destruction, this is Hogwarts, unbreakable Hogwarts, its so terrible, so so terrible.

    Brilliantly well written, kept my attentuion the entire time, kept reading too fast trying to find out what happened i was so terrified it was going to go wrong and yet i know the story line.

    I will congratulate you especially on the Killing of Voldy, i thought that was brillaintly done, i mean, you used such a simple answer to such great affect, it made the entire death of Voldemort seem so powwerful,

    LOVE CONQUERS ALL

    lovely message to send out, so well written, the whole bantering between Voldy and Harry was brillaint too, i loved the way Voldy tried to attack him psycologically from every angle, from his parents, severus, his dreams even, seemed very in charcter the entire time, Voldy was very Voldy.

    I thought this was one of the most exciting chapters you've ever written, you've got a great plot line, a great way of making the characters themselves in situations you wouldnt expect, you bring it alive brillaintly.

    Well done baby,
    MWAH
    ChasteBlush (a very excited.)

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  • From ANON - Sleipner84 on November 30, 2005
    EVIL! Evil author, leaving the story to a point where one should absolutely keep reading. If it were a book, no one would put it down at this point. A wery good story I have to say. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - JJ on November 30, 2005
    Please tell me Harry was saved by Dumbledore's mass apparation!!!!

    This was tightly written and well worked out.
    Your friends must be very proud of what you created.
    I'd tell them "Thank You" from a loyal reader who hadn't yet given up hope.
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  • From ANON - Demon on November 30, 2005
    OH GOD UPDATE!!!!!! This is amazing, fantastic, spectcular, great, awsome, I can't think of any more words but I love this and can't wait for the next chapter please update soon
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 30, 2005
    Oh, what happened to Harry! Gasp! Please update soon. He can't be dead. Not after finally killing Voldemort. Please! Welcome back by the way!
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  • From ArchNemesis on November 29, 2005
    Is Draco really dead? Omg! It seems that Severus is killing everyone that he ever cared about. What happened to Harry? He's going to be okay, right? So many questions.

    Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From ANON - LB on November 27, 2005
    Love this story. It Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I just found it on AFF.net and was wondering if you were gonna finish it since it hasn't been updated in a while. I don't usually review since i feel that since i don't write i have no room to judge, but this story is excellent. I love it. Please let me know if u r gonna finish it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish it . I am hanging on the edge of my seat.
    Thanks
    Liz
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on November 16, 2005
    sigh just wishing for an update so harry can kill voldie and we can get on with sev/harry story...puppy eyes..update pretty please...
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  • From ANON - angel on November 09, 2005
    wow this is a great story please update soon ..i would like to read what will happen next ... keep up the great workamd later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Fred2928 on November 07, 2005
    Great story review asap
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2005
    I think you need to clarify what Severus thinks of Dumbledore. Does he despise him, but obeys his orders because he must, or does he respect him but becomes infuriated from time to time? Because at the moment it seems he swings from one to the other with no apparent reason other than the needs of the plot.
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  • From ANON - Christine on November 06, 2005
    I am Romanian, and all this chapter's effect war ruined by your translation. Basically, translating into English from Romanian, the first rows are like this:

    warrior thing, friend release, in the cat darkness land - journey to stop

    friend follow surely, to take care next to they

    he face now vine

    bakes he dead

    he thing

    journey in the cat darkness land
    ... etc. Some of the words don't even exist in Romanian...

    Needless to say, I was rolling on the floor laughing by the time I finished. If you want, I can give you the proper translation, and though I can't say I'm an expert, at least it won't sound ridiculous.

    Overall, one of the greatest story I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - woof on October 24, 2005
    Does your muse require more warm brownies, ice cream and chocolate syrup drizzled over the top??????????????/
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  • From ANON - ChasteBlush on October 23, 2005
    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, baby this is fantastic, better than the first time i reasd it by far, you#'ve achieved your mission, you made the chapter great, my God thats got to be Voldemort, obviously, and jesus, the carnage, i like the way Snape turns to look at it and realises how hopeless the situation is, how awful such lose of life is. oh its so terrible, they're all dead, they never stood a chance.
    i'm sorry its taken me so long to leave you a review, i've been so busy as you know, now i've got an hour to myself so i thought i'd do this and tell you what i think.
    Definatly an excelllent chapter, loving the Dillon coming on to Severus bit, that was good and so artfully handled by Severus. And Voldemort at the end, that was good, Hello Harry potter, poor boy, poor poor boy. I wondder what he'kll say to him now then. the whole vampire idea, the kid and everything was very good, well thought of, especially love this kid, so sweet, so innocent, a ray of hope for AHrry, if he cant come out of this alive for Severus, he hasnt to stay alive for the kid, he needsd a father now. Lol.
    Anyway update soon, please,
    Luv you hun,
    ChasteBlush (formerly Dracosbitch)
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    mwah x
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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 23, 2005
    Oh that is just CRUEL to end the chaptor like that!! This has become one of my favorite stories on the site, and i eagerly await the next update! So update SOON!!
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