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Reviews for Confusing Emotions

By : FaeChild
  • From ANON - kuni on December 05, 2006
    I really like this story and I'm so looking forward to how Sev and Harry's relationship will go. I wonder when Sev is going to admit he loves Harry *hint* *hint*

    Looking forward to your next update on this
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 26, 2005
    Oh, I really liked the sex part, both times * lol * It was very well presented.

    I'm not sure if there's a plot to this story, who cares anyways?, but it would make the story more plausible if there were.

    Your writing is good, but I've noticed some typo errors like; 'check' instead of 'cheek' and 'knell' instead of 'kneel'. You may want to review these or get a Beta. It really doesn't detract from what's going on, anyone can make it out quite well.

    Can't wait for the next installment, I know it'll get even better.
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