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Reviews for What she needs

By : KrystyWroth
  • From Mesartim on January 17, 2012
    Wow, i'm shock.

    About your note, i agree its can be but well not random. Genes is not about your dad, your mom or your granddad-mom its carry all of your ancestor and hidden those hair or looks until something make it show up again (like another similar hidden form of genes). To say i'm Thai with both parent have black hair/black eyes but if one of my great-great-great-parent married to some foreign with blue eyes and blone hair my child can have thoes looks as well its just depend on the right time and the right one.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on March 11, 2008
    omg u have 2 do a sequel!
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  • From wudelfin on August 25, 2007
    that was just wicked...so slytherin
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  • From ANON - Athena on September 05, 2005
    that was great! I do wish you would write more!
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  • From ANON - Rene on July 17, 2005
    .........wow.
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  • From ANON - Tyronica on July 04, 2005
    I like the story. About the hair, if I am not mistaken red hair and blond hair are closely related.
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  • From ANON - angeleyez on July 04, 2005
    wow. that was a shocker. im like Draco now. speechless. great story. loved the plot.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on July 04, 2005
    Great story, I liked it. My brother was platinum blond as a child too, and then some time after he was about 5 or 6 his hair changed to dark brown. So the hair thing is absolutely true.
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  • From ANON - Penguin on July 04, 2005
    Hi, I enjoyed your story, but I have a comment about your author's note. Genes do determine your hair color, but in a complicated way. I think the easiest way to describe it is to picture boxes with lids. Each box is a gene and the lid is on or off depending on whether a gene is being expressed (in use) or not. You get a box from your mom and a box from your dad for some things, but for hair color each parent gives you several boxes. At different times in your life, the lids are opened and closed, and sometimes what's in one box is so strong that you don't see what's in another box. The stronger trait is called "dominant" and the weaker trait is called "recessive". For example, many people have lighter hair as children and their hair darkens at puberty. Then when they are old the pigment fades and they may have white or grey hair. Or, as in your case, your parents have dark hair and blond hair, but you have red. That means both of your parents had red hair to contribute, but you couldn't see it because the other colors are dominant. Back to the boxes: your dad had brown boxes and red boxes, and your mom had blonde boxes and red boxes. They both happened to give you red boxes, and that's what you see because that's what's in all your boxes.
    A similar thing happens with eye color, but with fewer boxes and a narrower range of color choices.

    Good luck with your writing!

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  • From ANON - Joi on June 28, 2005
    Oh, I wish you would do at least one more chapter, I feel like I'm hanging here! Anyway, good job! It's a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - aries66 on June 27, 2005
    This stroy really shouldn't be a on shot...you're a good wrier and this story has ALOT of potential...and i'd read it, i'll probably add this stry to my faves, and check in on it every once in a while to see if you changed your mind.
    **~~Aries66~~**
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on June 27, 2005
    This is sort of sad really. Living your life, just going through the motions. Not being unhappy enough to make a change is not happiness. BTW, I agree, everyone in my family has either red or blonde hair and either blue or green eyes. Pretty random really, what everyone gets.
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  • From ANON - Christina on June 27, 2005
    it's a great story; i personally think you should continue with it but hey, you're the author and if you want to leave it as a one shot that so be it.
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  • From ANON - carolyn on June 27, 2005
    So if what you're saying holds true, it doesn't necessarily mean the child is Draco's child... although the implications hinting towards it at the end are very strong.

    This story was interesting. Good to know that Hermione and Ron's marriage survived for at least 5 years more-- with a little help that is. And seeing as how I speak from little experience since I'm not married, I'm wondering if once does the trick for a married woman. Wouldn't the woman in question want to go back for more?
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  • From ANON - Alice on June 27, 2005
    Write an sequel to this!!!!! pwease????
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