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Reviews for The boy he didn't know

By : Draconix
  • From ANON - AuctorRubra on July 02, 2005
    Hello! I think you have something really interesting going. I can't wait to see how Draco decides to take the situation in hand. Also, you're doing very well with your writing. Your English is great. The only problem I've seen is that there is a tense mix up here and there, but that's easy to get around. Can't wait to read the next update!

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  • From ANON - NightOwl on July 02, 2005
    Now you really HAVE TO continue :-)) Its sweet.
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  • From ANON - Clau on July 02, 2005
    You did very well even if your native language isn't english. Oh and scratch that question mark. This story IS to be continued.... I order you to write the sequel!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Clalyan on July 01, 2005
    I knew you do this someday the padawan has overcome the master ... what a great piece of art... but we're still
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  • From ANON - PadfootLivesOn on July 01, 2005
    Well I liked it! It would be a great One-shot. But I think you should go on with it. I think it has high hopes to become a good story. You english is fine by the way. I didn't really see anything wrong with it until you pointed it out. You could always get a beta to help you with your grammer, trust me they really do help. So I really hope to see a next chapter. If not it was great!!

    Cheer,
    Pamela
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 01, 2005
    It's definitely worth it, you should keep going. You already have them getting close to each other. I did notice that English was a SL for you, I've read a lot of stories from native English speakers who made more mistakes. Sometimes from the cadence I can tell what the first language is, but this was too short. LOL.
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  • From ANON - ladynight on June 30, 2005
    It was awsome!! I think you should definitly continue it and don't worry about your english it was fine. Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on June 30, 2005
    this is great.... yea... more would be good.. your english wasn't as bad as some people who it is their first language....
    keep up the good work..
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  • From ANON - Dezra on June 30, 2005
    LMAO Ron's out cold. You did a great job.
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  • From ANON - sharon on June 30, 2005
    Fine little story for sure. You sounded in your authors notes as if you are of different origin then english so please be proud, for you have done a good job of writing. It was quite clear and uncomplicated in understanding all that you were trying to portray.Keep writing and have fun and though critisism is important try to stay true to yourself and not let anyone change your story just because its not going the way that want it to.
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  • From EmeraldDragon on June 30, 2005
    no not impossible. to tell you the truth i was waiting for a sex or kiss scene. how pathetic can i get? but this was just as good. it was very heartwarming and feeling. i wonder why harry was crying perhaps sirius or he could have loved draco. anyway i know that this will turn into a lovely relationship whether you decide to continue it or not. it was very nice.
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  • From zentiis on June 30, 2005
    loved it! ^_^ .......sequel?
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  • From ANON - NightOwl on June 30, 2005
    Nice piece, I enjoyed it much. It could be "one-shot", it could be start of longer story.
    Im not a person to judge your English (in fact I read but almost not speak English - so I apologize for my poor language here) but I understood your text well :-).
    Good luck with more writing!
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  • From ANON - morgie on June 30, 2005
    i loved it keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Akusaa on June 30, 2005
    This is really good! You should continue it, I'd love to know what happens in Hogwarts!
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