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Reviews for Devil\'s Snare

By : ShoushiAme
  • From ANON - antipyro on August 16, 2005
    This story just keeps getting better and better. It's soooo off-the-wall that it really has me hooked.

    Please continue with your plot building, it will make the story and the Snarry sooooo much more worth it.

    I know it's a scary thing, but I can't wait to see Harry's new power unleashed. *shudders*.

    Great work, please post again when you can.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 15, 2005
    Ooh Lovely, wonderful update!

    I love how you introduced Dessmona, gives a brilliant mental image of her. And Avenairu, oh Avenairu ... he does seem a tad scary, ha thats kinda funny, i mean he is a devil of course hes a tad scary. * snickers * God I'm stupid sometimes ... anyway

    I cannot wait for the next chapter, this is definitally one of my 'most interesed in' fics at the moment, lol.

    Love it! Please update soon .. - Jessica
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  • From NihilEtNemo on July 14, 2005
    Wow... interesting stroy. Can't wait for the Snarry-ness, buit I'm patient... *hums a little tune* Anyway... wierd. I ususally don't like OCs... wonder if maybe Veelas are part angel or someting? :D Luverly, though, to get back on track... looks very promising, despite the ooc-ness of Draco.
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on July 10, 2005
    XD Yay, the plot thickens.... I think. *sweat drop* Dude, Avenairu sounds like some creepy bird. Like a feathered bat. Very nice name. Where did Dessmone come from? I like how she acts too. People always think Angels are all nice and what not. Not always true. Angels do what they have to do to protect the world and its inhabitants.

    So an Angel acting evil is not that odd of a thought to me.
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  • From ANON - Marie on July 09, 2005
    That was good, hope to read the next chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - Tashia on July 09, 2005
    its good story...keep up the good work ^^'
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 08, 2005
    Holy Fucking Christ!!! You cant just leave it there!!! Nooo!! It was soooooooooooooooooooo good!!! Ooh gods please update soon, I loved the cliffe. Well, I loved what happened, It makes me want to pluck my eyebrows out that its a cliffhanger.... kind of a love/hate relationship. Lol.

    Love the fic! Cannot wait to read more!!! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - jess on July 06, 2005
    this sounds intresting which side will harry choose?
    i like draco getting along with harry
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  • From ANON - War-chan on July 06, 2005
    ().()! YOU! ARE! A! VERY! EVIL, EVIL! PERSON!!!! I really HATE cliffys!!!!! The're EVIL!!! Like you!!! On an other note! ^_^ THANK YOU OH, SO MUCH!!!!!!! (I'm pretty sure you know what for ^_~!) An slighty OOC Draco is comptely ok.....really I kindda like him like that anyway ^_^! If I wasn't in a liebarry (yes I know thats not how its sp but i like it that way...) I would be jumping up and down in my chair!!! *Me: Jump, jump! ^_^ Liebarry Person: Shhh!!!! Me: -.-:....Damn.* Ok! Now I'm rabbleing! For my end note *Me: Lala!! LP:Shhhhh!!!! Me:......evil...bwahahaha!!! -this said in a hushed tone ^.^- I win!* PLEASE PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Ja ne
    LOVEYourStory!!!
    Miss War-chan ^_~
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 06, 2005
    'Chapter One' was really good and the Cliffie wasn't so bad, but damn, this story is really intriguing.

    You've managed to get most of the personalities fairly well, even though I don't agree with Severus being Draco's godfather.....anyways.....

    The drama you've built up is terrific. I wonder why Harry is rooming with Draco instead of his longtime friend, Ron? Does that little bit of trust Harry has for Draco part of it??? Why is Ron so 'out-of-it'?

    ....and who is this person from the blue light??????

    Please update sooner, please?????
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on July 06, 2005
    EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! T_T *grumble grumble* Still, very nice piece.
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  • From ANON - snarkymistress on July 05, 2005
    WOW O_O

    I'm just amazed! This is so different, I've never heard a plot like this. A fight over Harry's soul between a devil (I think) and an angel? WOW. THis is such a great start, I can't wait for more.

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

    LOL
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  • From ANON - War-chan on July 05, 2005
    'Hook, line, and sinker....You cought me! ^_^ Very nice start! Can't wait till the next UPDATE!!!! One thing...the point to this is that we (the readers) are not suppost to know if this will be Dark!Harry, Light!Harry, or *hopfuly* a loupol (I can't sp for the life me *sigh*) at where there "Might" be a Blance. Whatever happens thou I'm sure it'll be good (be it by just telling that your starting line!) ^_^ There's one small thing I'd like to know, when it comes to the slashy part....who will on the bottom/top? Because a ukey Sev is my fav! There's SO few of them!!!.....ummm...I just remembered that you said/typed that you'll be keeping them in IC sooo....I'm guessing that Sev's not going to be uke *disapionted sigh*....OH WELL! ^_^ ANYway! Love it so far and Please UPDATE soon ^___^!!!!

    Ja ne
    I'mAGuppyWhenItComesToGoodStories!
    Miss War-chan ^_~
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 02, 2005
    This is Different!

    Starting off with a Heaven/Hell bargain for Harry's soul is a good starting prologue. At first it was hard to grasp what exactly was going on, trying not to confuse the acting characters, thank you only two were present *whew*, and that jab about Middle Earth I thought I fell into a LotR story!!!....but no, I continued and found an intelligently written introduction with some unusual twists to it. Harry gets to train for just a few months in Hell??? How does he get there, then back?? if he wants the side of the light?? Oh, sorry, that's the story part...*hee hee*

    Devil's Snare, nice title pun - lol

    Can't wait for more....for your first fic, this is definately different, but fun to read. Please, continue.
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  • From AkumaKawa on July 02, 2005
    I like it. It has promise. Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
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