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Reviews for Devil\'s Snare

By : ShoushiAme
  • From toads70 on June 01, 2007
    love it , update please!
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  • From ANON - rowan_flame on January 05, 2007
    YAY!!! Much lovies to you! Please continue and update as soon as possible! Also, I'm kind-of curious as to why Harry hasn't taken back control from Avenairu, but I'm sure I'll find out in the next chapter! Awsome work. I can't wait to read more!! Loves Rowan!
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  • From ANON - Celticslash on January 04, 2007
    Fantastic i absolutely love this story and your idea is fantastic, and Snape dosen't diserve anything although he is still my fave character in HP! Wonder what his title going to be?

    Email me when theres an update please: vicky_robinson_1990@hotmail.co.uk

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2007
    i really like the story. Ron's such freaking whiny brat!!!!! makes me sick listening to him! just hex the little shit already!!!

    hope you post soon!!!
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  • From ANON - mindovermadness on November 28, 2006
    abso-bloody-lutely amazing!!!!! I impatiently await what happens next
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on January 11, 2006
    i look forwar to your next chapter update!! please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on December 30, 2005
    Loved the story and it's most recent development. Love the sword play scenario.

    I'm glad that you'll be developing Harry and Snape's relationship over the next while.

    Can't wait and Thanks soooo much for the email update notice.
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  • From ANON - Walter Dash on December 22, 2005
    This is very good, though I'm sure you know that. I like that Harry and Snape haven't simply jumped into bed together after first eye-contact. That they might develop a relationship is much more believable and enjoyable. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - potionsmaster35 on December 20, 2005
    Hey I really love your story. I hope you update soon. Do you have any tips for a new not very good writer? I would appreciate some advice. I love writing, but I just can't seem to carry on a plot line. Anyways, thanks for the good read. It's been a while since I've found a good story.

    keep up the good work

    -potionsmaster35
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  • From ANON - War-chan on December 09, 2005
    I've JUST got my computer back!! And I got the very lovely surpise that your story updated when my com died on me(your the 1st story that I checked.)! I am slightly wanting the loven between Harry and Severus to hurry along, but you do have a point that going slowly makes it seem more realistic. I too hate Ginny and I'm VERY glad that she is almost no where in your story ^_^. Btw My b-day was Nov.11 (I'm lucky, having a no school day for a b-day! ^-^). On Harry's wings I was a little confused, are they angelic wings though black? do they look like cystile*sp* feathers? spikey or soft? I just pictured a mix (this is what I usely do when I'm not sure about somthing in a story)=soft for the body of the feathers but a spikey-like top part and tips*which I imaged the spikes shoting out of*. I'm not sure I'm right....ANY~way! I actully am hopeing that Ron (nasty Weasle!) does not get over whatever he's going through, I mean, who would WANT to keep a friend that keeps such an problem as high as that? "Oh! your richer than me? I hate you. Your famus!? I really hate you. Oh! You have an other personalty thats a demon and can kill me at any time that you lose controll? I fear you now so, I hate you." Now tell me who would REALLY want that friend!?
    But this is all besides the point that I review........PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! *do author's EVER get tired of seeing that? ^_~)

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  • From ANON - Ari on November 30, 2005
    I agree with your opinions on Ron and Ginny. Snape is such a promising character (well until HBP but hopefully that will be explained away)
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  • From BoundnHurt on November 30, 2005
    O.O wow.. i started reading this fic a while back and i couldn't get into it.. then i thought.. hmmmm... why is that?? so i went back and read it over again.. and i found why.. you were just going over the preliminary's of the story. you know introducing and explaining.. so i said to my self 'Self, read the damn explanations and the reasons.. they are there for.' So i read and when i kept on reading i was like.. OOOOO this isn't half bad.. it's really interesting and noone has taking this approach before... at least in the ones i have read. Even though i am still confuse about the bet/wager between the kingdom of heaven and the kingdom of Hell.. i have come to understand that Harry is the Prince of Hell.. and yet he is the buffer between teh 2.. ARGH!!! at least that's what i think.. and once his Soul meshes he we'll be the Shiznit?? Am i right? or am i close? anyhoo.. could i get an email letting mew know when you update? Please. ying_faa@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - shadow on October 17, 2005
    This is rather funny. I like it alot. You've done a great job expressing the characters' personalities. You're doing good so far even if it's your first fic on HP/SS. Please continue writing it. Hope to see more of this wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - JaYJaY on September 25, 2005
    I really like it. It's not something I've already seen before. Plz get the next chappy out. SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on September 24, 2005
    Heheh, I totally did not see this updated, so my apologies for reviewing so late. (Hey, anything past two days is late to me!)

    I must admit, this is getting rather interesting. I'm curious as to how this is going to move along (Which I believe I have said this before) but more specifically, in the relationship between not only Harry and Severus, but also Harry and Avenairu as well as Dessmona. (Also Avenairu and Severus... would that be considered a three way? Probably not, but that would be interesting if Avenairu had a way to astrally project himself while Harry was still conscious. Oh the sinfully delicious possibilities.)

    Anyways, PLEASE write the next chapter soon. (Or type it up and send it to beta or whatever you do.) I really wanna see how this progresses.
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