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By : Bargle5
  • From Bargle5 on October 19, 2007
    Hi Dragen. The name change thing is a result of the basic premise of the piece, namely that the different sections are supposed to be from different drafts of the story with there being small differences between. It will happen again as I write more.
    Sorry you didn't like the name Herfinehiney. Humor is often a matter of individual taste and no one likes everything.
    Thanks for taking the time to review. It is much appreciated.
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  • From on October 18, 2007
    Not a bad start to the story, I didn'tlike the name change half way through the story... I really didn't like the name Herfinehiney...
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  • From Bargle5 on July 09, 2007
    Thanks very much, Spike. Glad you enjoyed it.
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  • From WilliamSpike on July 08, 2007
    I don't care who you are, that's funny shit, there.
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  • From ANON - That one girl on September 06, 2006
    Ok I think I just found Harry Potter A LOT more enjoyable (even though I'm a HP freak) I espiecially like the Sleep Fucky Sickness and how Percy missed it. But the thin kwere the mother just knows I found that just slightly disturbing
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  • From ANON - Lady Greyhame on July 30, 2005
    Hilarious!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2005
    That was the stupidest thing I have ever read in my life.
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  • From Bargle5 on July 05, 2005
    I'm only anticipating two chapters being necessary for the second year stuff. One of the nice things about AFF is, if needed, I can go back and add another chapter.
    No, I haven't come up with the Slytherin names yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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  • From on July 05, 2005
    I love your stories, but how can you ahve a chapter 6 and no chapter 5 ? I like how you have their names, it's too funny. Do have one made up for any of the Slytherins ?
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  • From ANON - Aisling on July 02, 2005
    LOL :D :D this is funny!! i like very much cya xx
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