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Reviews for Draco\'s Revenge

By : jaber03
  • From ANON - Lara_Kal-El on June 28, 2013
    This is an interesting story, but for warnings I would suggest you add BDSM, since that's basically what you've done. Not saying it's a bad thing I like the story alot. Poor Hermione, she's been sold to draco lol.
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  • From Coipje on July 01, 2008
    I think Hermione is a little bit too I don't know not Gryffindor
    no courage
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  • From luvhp on August 15, 2007
    Wow, I just reviewed all of your previous reviews, now I know why you didn't continue. I'm so sorry that people are so blatantly RUDE. They don't have to read it ya know. You really shouldn't listen to them anyway!

    Note to reviewers: Geez guys, since most of you have NEVER written stories, why so harsh? Ease up peeps!
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  • From luvhp on August 15, 2007
    Poor Hermione and Ginny, but hey, if you're going to be anyone's concubine, might as well be DRACO'S!!!!!! :)
    Hell yeah, and you KNOW those boys are hard watching Draco do Ginny!

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - jk. on November 25, 2005
    jk.
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  • From ANON - purple11 on November 02, 2005
    to be bluntly honest, I HATED IT!
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  • From ANON - haaaahaaaaa on September 16, 2005
    really nice story homie... waitin anxiously 4 more
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  • From ANON - hippiebum on September 11, 2005
    Am slightly confused, you said that the original story was written by somebody named Katharin, went and looked it up, and your name appears. It seems to be the same story, a lot of lines are copied out of the original one shot. The original story seems to be written pretty well opposed to yours which has a plethora of spelling and grammer errors. This story would be much better if the characters were less OOC and more believable. Hermione would never, ever start peeling off her knickers for Malfoy. There would definately be a fight, and a rape scene, maybe even a threesome would be good for this story. But since you have no ability whatsoever for writing a story, my advice is to drop it. You ruined it with the horrible OOC characters, and the capitalized swear words in chapter two. Not much else I can say for this story, but please discontinue.
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  • From ANON - Quiet One on July 07, 2005
    Very interesting fic you've got going here. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Snowe on July 05, 2005
    This was awful. You are in desperate need of an intensive grammar review.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on July 04, 2005
    Please don't continue this. What you seriously need to do is go back from the beginning and revise and revise and revise again. Keep a dictionary handy, because most of your pronouns aren't even in context with the rest of the sentence. It is hard to read and way out there as well. Too far out there.
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  • From ANON - me on July 04, 2005
    wow continue
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  • From ANON - Michelle on July 04, 2005
    i think what youur doing is a reallllly good ideaa and keep up wiyth the lemons! like maybe a threesome or something...and now with katarin...wow ! is there going to be like an orgy with all the grandaughers because i think that would be a good idea ... . yea anyway i think this story is awesome so far and to keep up the good work and please update sooon!!!! thanks !
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2005
    I can easily say that this is the worst fic I have ever read.
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