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By : Aline
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From reirei on November 15, 2007
    Bloody fantastic angst. Will now move on to sequel!!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From twilight on May 04, 2007
    i like it you should make it into a short story put a litlle more into it
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  • From ANON - ellie on February 10, 2007
    i was just wondering if you wrote a full length version of this story on fanfiction.net because seriously i read a story that was EXACTLY like this...practically word for word. but yah. anways great read.
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  • From ANON - Psyche on November 14, 2006
    HOT DAMN! That was awesome! Despite "the rape"... I thoroughly enjoyed this bittersweet masterpiece. I would like to see it continued, actually! Ha ha. But it was "she was MAKING too much noise"... not "doing" (when Hermione first said Stupefy.) Anyway, I gotta go to class now!
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  • From ANON - LP on March 11, 2006
    Please continue this story, I can`t stop thinking, Is Hermione pregnant? What will Draco do? Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Leeree on February 13, 2006
    Awesome! I'm glad your friend hounded you about adding to the story...else I would have. lol!

    ~Leeree
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  • From ANON - catie on October 18, 2005
    Its a good idea but you wrote it horribly. Any time Hermione screamed all you did was AHH! You need to use detail. You need to make the reader feel like they are there. Use adjetives they're a great thing. Also brush up on the spelling of the spells. You SLAUGHTERED them.
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  • From ANON - 0o0itzNiteLite on August 29, 2005
    awwwwwwwww.. datzz sad... hermione wuz tryna help draco.. but instead rapedd her.. nwayssss... keeepp on updatin.. lovin it!
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  • From ANON - michelle on July 11, 2005
    I don't get the end.
    Are you writing a sequel?

    Its an okay story.
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  • From ANON - silently on July 07, 2005
    I think this one shot would make a great story. It would be great to see a sequal come out! I liked it, if i hope to see a continuation ~silently
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  • From ANON - bonniegirl on July 05, 2005
    i really like this, i wish u had have written more

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  • From ANON - stuffed penguin toy on July 05, 2005
    i think this story has a great start, it is very individual and original, please make it a multi chapter story!!!
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  • From ANON - Chris on July 04, 2005
    A couple things to improve upon:

    Use a spell and grammar check at least (beta's even better)
    Keep the characters *in* character
    The ending made no sense
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