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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Shiverin Descendent

By : Lori
  • From ANON - fox on January 09, 2006
    i think that this story is really good and i do hope that u finish it.....and those who make coments about how bad somebody spells or uses grammer are those who don't realize that it is hard to post a story on the internet for eveyone to read and so should keep there coment to themselves....anyways, i realy do like your story......so please finish
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  • From ANON - Serenity Venus Sakura Tracey Hart on January 03, 2006
    Yay! I'm finally reviewing your story! ^_^ I totally love it! It has to be my favorite that I've ever read... I com back every day to check and see if you have added the next chapter yet or not! -_-6 I know, I act like I'm still 16... but isn't that a good thing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - DarkRemembrence on January 01, 2006
    I'm also hoping to know what happens after they've bonded. I read up to there and I'm seriously hoping something good happens to them. They deserve it.

    ~Dark~
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  • From ANON - DarkRemembrence on January 01, 2006
    I really love your story and I hope you don't end it. I first saw it at ff.net but then they kicked it off the site and I kind of got pissed at them. I do hope you continue to write as you have always done. I can only see in the chatpers that a few rephrasing would do and some spelling of words are wrong. I wish you the best of luck for this new year.

    ~Dark~
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  • From ANON - itsalladream on December 30, 2005
    I don't know what other ppl are saying, but I really enjoy reading your work. It is creative, funny and its well written. I say keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Sweet Desserts on December 30, 2005
    Ohh, I like the entire story and premise! It's a new direction and plot line. The names and new words confuse me a little bit, but I eventually figure it out. I would tweak the grammar, but then again, I'm no expert either. ;) There is one suggestion I would like to give, maybe at the top (or bottom, whichever) you should leave a little dictionary for all the words used thus far in the fic. It would certainly make it easier on the reader.

    Other than that, I greatly enjoy the story as well as all the twists. Never would have thought. Ignore the bad reviewers, sweetie, their usually just idiots anyways. I usually just challenge them to write a story and *then* come talk to me.

    Keep up the good work,

    ~ Sprinkles
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  • From ANON - xGraveyardxBluex on December 30, 2005
    i absolutely love this story. i can tell its well thought out. and its so detailed! i love the plot as well. i have read a lot of stories but this is dfinately an original. so that means it kicks ass : ) keep up the good work! i cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Doom on December 29, 2005
    Really, the nerve of some people! I don't review often, but I should start reviewing more often. I love this story and I don't care about your spelling! I know you've got up to chapter nine done.... so seriously. POST THEM!!!! I was one of your fans when you posted on FF.net and I remember the chapters up to the train! PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Midnight Fairy on December 29, 2005
    those bastards!
    how dare they insult your work
    it is a good and well thought out story
    and there are hardly any gramatical errors
    words can accidently be missed
    don't mind them and keep up the good work
    i love your story
    and i really hope to see an update soon

    signed

    an impatient fan
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  • From ANON - Silver Nocturne on December 29, 2005
    I absolutely love your story! XD I can't wait for the next installment! Also, I know this may seem a bit unorthodox, but would you mind terribly sending me an e-mail when you update next? Thanx! Much Luck!
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  • From ANON - queixo on December 28, 2005
    hi. i started reading your story last night and decided to wait till i was finished before i reviewed.
    i like the premise of your story even though some parts happen too fast, it still seems more thought out than alot i've read.
    as for stopping here, i hope you don't because then the reviewer who decided to be an ass because of spelling and grammar errors which were alot less than quite a few stories on this site would win and that would suck rotten eggs.
    that said i would like to offer to be your beta-reader. i haven't done it before so i don't have references as such but i do speak and write perfect english - it's probably the only language i can speak and write properly. my email should show above but if not it's LUGIA_DC@YAHOO.COM. if you want i can start with what you've posted already. just email me the chapters in 1 text file or you could use MS word but you would need to let me know which version of it you have. i'm using word 2003.
    again i repeat please don't let a dumbass reviewer make you stop this story, i for one want to know how it ends.
    Queixo
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 28, 2005
    I don't normally leave many reviews, but I just thought I would tell you that I really do enjoy your story. I don't mind the problems people are saying you have, and really like the plot. Please continue with this and don't let what others have to say get to you.
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  • From ANON - Alison on December 28, 2005
    I love this story!!! Thanks for updating! =o)
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  • From eiriyukithewriter on December 28, 2005
    HI!
    I love your story!! it's really interesting and it has a good plot and it even has a great title to it to!!
    do u still need a beta?..........I'm willing to be your beta if u need one.

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  • From ANON - momoko on December 28, 2005
    good story
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