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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Shiverin Descendent

By : Lori
  • From ANON - mab on December 27, 2005
    Please keep writing and posting. This story is too original and I am enjoying it too much to be all that bothered by spelling errors.
    You shouldn't let what one person says upset you, unless that person has as much courage as you and is a published author which you have read and you respect their work.
    If they are just some litte pissant who doesn't write and publish, then I say what do they know!
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  • From ANON - Hallie012 on December 27, 2005
    I don't know what kind of reviews you are getting but I really like this story, and would love for you to continue writing it.
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  • From ANON - EVILONE on December 27, 2005
    I have heard of beta readers but never understood what it meant? If you explain it to me i may be able to help you out? also i beleive i have read this on fanfiction.net but then the author just up and quit and i was so upset!!!! anyway anyone who dosent like your story is a complete idiot! I love it and wish you many more great chapters!!!!! your doing good!~


    EVILONE
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  • From ANON - RealityNotDreams on December 27, 2005
    Hey, I'm sorry about the rude reviews. I know how much that must hurt. But I LOVE your story, a lot.
    I haven't reviewed before, I'm sorry. I'm terribly shy and scared that I'll say something wrong but I thought, Hell with it, I'll review now.
    Your story is wonderful and I LOVE Draco/Harry (Dom!Draco and Sub!Harry). I crave it sometimes and wow, your story just always feeds my craving. I'm a little weird, sorry.
    Ahem. But if you ever need an extra Beta person, email me and I'll help. I'm not a grammar or spelling whiz but I get by. =]
    And I could beta your past chapters so you could repost them all spiffy and such or I could just beta new chapters. Whatever. I'm flexible.
    Ok, I'm starting to ramble.
    I Love your story, it's bloody amazing. One of my favorites. Fucking amazing.
    Keep up the great work, dear.

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  • From ANON - Jes on December 27, 2005
    I am sorry to hear about the rude reviewers who have been slandering your wonderful story. I can completely understand your perdicament with the beta, you should remind them that you do warn them that there is no beta for this story... I would just like to tell you that I discovered your sorry today and am totally speachless when it comes to this story. Never before have I read anything so creative and new. I must tell you that i can not wait for an update to this wonderful story, I look forward to more and wish you luck with the rude reviewers. Thank you so much for your story you truely inspire the mind and stimulate the awakening of the imagination. I would just like to say that if you ever need help with your story do not hesitate to contact me my other email is mil05029@byui.edu... thank you again Jes
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  • From ANON - sam on December 27, 2005
    Hey...I love this story...it is really good....I know this isn't helpful or anything but i can't see anything wrong with the story so any constructive critisism i would type would be totally untrue....update ASAP
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  • From ANON - becca on December 27, 2005
    Ignore rude people. They're unhappy and don't understand why the rest of us aren't unhappy too. For what it's worth, I think you're writing a great story. I'm hooked and hope you post more soon.
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  • From ANON - veronica on December 27, 2005
    Hey, I love your story, and I hope that you will update soon. I'm sorry about you not being able to keep a beta for long periods of time. If you want, I'll gladly beta read your work. I love it.

    Tinuniel (aka Veronica)
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  • From ANON - hi people on December 27, 2005
    i love this stey i love it!!! i love!!! it i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Byrnes on December 27, 2005
    I'm sorry to hear that people have been badmouthing your story. I, personally, love it. It's very original. I like the way you took a typical plot of Harry or Draco being mates and making it completely your own and forming a whole new world. If you'd like, I could serve as a permanent beta. I more often than not check my e-mail every day, so if you'd like to take me up on my offer, feel free to drop me a note. I don't mind beta'ing and I know how valuable they can be. When one reviews their own work it can be very difficult to catch errors because they have the "correct" words so deeply ingrained in their mind.
    Best wishes,
    Byrnes
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    It's going great!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!! I adore your version of Harry/Draco so far. *waits hopefully for next chapter like a puppy waiting for a treat*
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    its very good
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  • From ANON - Miss Loaf on December 27, 2005
    Hey - just a quick note to say how much i'm loving this fic - I haven't enjoyed reading any H/D fics for so long, and its really refreshing to find an original idea like this :D. I saw in your A/N that you don't have a full-time beta, so i'm now offering you my services - i haven't done so for ages, but i have beta'd before in the past, and am also an English Lit. student, so i would think that i'm qualified :P. If you do want a beta, get in touch, if not, don't worry! Hope you had a good Christmas!

    MissLoaf x x
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  • From ANON - AngelStarFire on December 27, 2005
    ..I can't believe someone would do that to you. Flames drive me absolutly off the wall, and considering how wonderful your story is, I'd shoot them. >:( I really love your story... at first I was thinking "okay... it looks interesting", but by the time I finished that last chapter, I was immediatly looking for a 'next chapter' button... lol.

    You've done a wonderful job with the creature creation, and although the characters are wonderfully OOC, I still see traits of their old selves popping up at random moments. :) I'm really enjoying this, and if you need a beta, I will be more than willing to do it for you. I have a decent command of english grammar and spelling (although I screw up a lot too, lol). I did notice several spelling mistakes throughout, but they are few and far between, and since your chapters are so big it really isn't very noticable. :D

    Anyhow, I'm very sorry someone flamed your story. :( It isn't right for people to do that.. you've taken time to write this for entertainment purposes (and I for one really love it) and that work shouldn't be thrown out like that. This story is WONDERFUL, and if anyone else says something to the contrary, I'll beat them with a frozen tuna. Promise. :)

    This story gets a 10/10 for creativity and length of chapters. Thank you so much for sharing it here... seriously. :)

    --AngelStarFire
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  • From ANON - TeeDee on December 27, 2005
    Mmm! Yet again another lovely chapter! I adore where this is going... for the second time... but I AM dying to read more. Ah well. With how wonderful it is coming together once more, I can be patient until completely new stuff enters in! XD
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