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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Shiverin Descendent

By : Lori
  • From In2Deep on December 26, 2005
    bon, bon, je amore es!!! um... i think thats right... but yes i love it and i cant wait to read more... so up-dates soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    well, they found out? good, finally! can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - evalhanne on December 23, 2005
    This is a truly awesome story. I can't wait to read more! I'm sorry that it got erased in the first place.
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  • From ANON - Leah on December 21, 2005
    WOW! This is REALLY good! ^-^ *gives you giant Christmas muffin* Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From In2Deep on December 20, 2005
    ... aww... how cute... im kinda starting to put the pices togeather but im still a little lost... i hope that you can up-dates soon...
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  • From ANON - Blaky on December 14, 2005
    I absolutely adore your fic! >__< you have a wonderful way of writing and describing the characters, it's so vivid and unique the way you picture them!! in particular the way you picture Draco! So dominant and manly! >///
    .< Imagine that I am some kind of little fur ball with impossibly large eyes , how can you say no to me?! *___* (puppy eyes)
    P.S.
    I order you to update more often!!!....PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - avihenda on November 08, 2005
    this was a really sweet story. I was suprised.
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  • From ANON - Snarky B. on November 08, 2005
    I'd get a beta reader if I were you. Running the story through a spell-check program isn't enough. For example, 'fair' and 'fare' are both spelled correctly, yet have completely different meanings. You made this mistake in the first paragraph alone. It's simple mistakes like these that detract from an otherwise good story. Compare these kinds of mistakes to a verbal storyteller who mumbles. The storyteller may be telling a good story, but the mumbling detracts from the story and listeners will soon lose interest. Written stories are no different. It's all in the presentation.
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  • From ANON - lizzy on November 07, 2005
    I quite enjoy this story, even though your spelling and punctuation are absolutely atrocious. *Laughs* But that happens to the best of us. Anyway, just wanted to encourage you to keep writing. It's an interesting idea. But you sort of confused me a bit at the beginning of the chapter. Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't Hildey accompany them on their last trip? Because I seem to recall it being mentioned that everyone went last time, and yet, this time, she was excited because she had never gone before. I just thought I'd point that out. Also, if you're interested in a beta, I'd be happy to do that for you.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 07, 2005
    I love this fic! Top Draco/bottom Harry is on of my favorites. I can't wait until the boys can get together for more than talks. And how does Severus play into all of this?
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 07, 2005
    I have only read up to this chapter so far, but I had to comment on "H.D. Shipper." Best laugh I had all day! Off to read the rest
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  • From ANON - Black_Cat on November 07, 2005
    Please update soon the story is really great... sometimes a little confusing, but great^^
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  • From ANON - sarah on November 07, 2005
    hey i really love this story and i want to read more. I couldn't get that yahoo link to work. is there an alternate way to get to the yahoo group, because my computer is claiming it does not exist
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  • From ANON - Lika on November 07, 2005
    Thanks for a good reading. Hope to find some more...
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 07, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 7! Did Harry just channel Mava? Harry is in danger and Draco will leave him with Hermione and Ron. He needs to come forward and let them know. Oh I worry so!
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