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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Shiverin Descendent

By : Lori
  • From ANON - ginny molly potter on October 17, 2005
    "o.k everyone after sending many e-mails and now after leaving a few messages on angel lain's livejournal she has answered and I am thankful she did! This is what she she wrote on her live journal in response to my comments on her live journal I copyed and pasted this straight from her : "Okay I've decided to start a Yahoo group. Since so many people wanted me to post all the chapters for 'Shiverin Descendent' I have started a yahoo group where I am going to be posting my stories as well. For now only the nine chanpters of 'Shiverin' is up but I hope to have some of my other Harry Potter fanfiction up soon. For now it is not age restricted only because I can't figure out where the settings options are (I also want to change the color.) Does anyone know anything about Yahoo groups? For now I ask you to be responsible that you are of age to read this fic. Also I ask that no one post files since that is something else that will be restricted once I figure out how. But go ahead and message to your hearts content. And if you want to post pictures please keep them Harry Potter related (they don't only have to be related to my fanfictions I'm always interested in Harry Potter art)and for now please keep them R and lower thanks. I hope that some of you join thanks." The group is The Knackered Angel http://groups.yahoo.com/group/knachered_angel/ ,so as u can see people for now if u want to read up to chp nine again go to her yahoo group! I hope this helps all of my fellow fans of angel lain!
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  • From ANON - shadowraven113 on October 13, 2005
    love your story please update soon
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  • From ANON - joanna on October 11, 2005
    This is one of the most capitiavting fics i am cureently reading...please continue, i cant wait for c6
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  • From ANON - xpyne on October 03, 2005
    i KNOW you had way more chapters before... what happened to them? I can understand if your account got deleted (ff.net deletes everybody, those 'tards) but why haven't you re-posted them? i like your fic because it's one of the only "Harry and Draco are inexplicably magical sex creatures that must fuck!bond or die and are of course way hotter than the general populas!!!" fix that had an interesting story to it. I wanna know what's up with the full-blooded shiverin and their crazy world domination plans! i swear there like, 15 chapters and harry was preggers or something and they were back at hogwarts....Oo;; so yeah. please update and/or repost!!
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  • From ANON - Ryasha on September 29, 2005
    Ooo, I love this story. xD It's so hot. *fans herself* I can't wait for the next chapter. =D I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - jessica on September 22, 2005
    i love this story please update soon
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  • From ANON - Drow_Crazy on September 21, 2005
    I am going to get my knickers in a twist if you don't add some more soon...
    By the way, love the story, trully.....
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  • From ANON - Shini on September 18, 2005
    write as fast as your phalanges can plz. that is my request. coooooooooool story.

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  • From ANON - Ritinha on September 17, 2005
    I have a doubt... you are re-writing this extraordinary fanfic because Fanfition.net didn't allow it how it was, right? The sex scenes and all that stuff... But here in AdultFanfition they allow that things, so you could put all the 10 chapters that are already writen! Why don't you do that? =)
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on September 16, 2005
    I remember reading this when you first posted.. I am so glad that you are reposting it.. i was readingit on FF.net but it takes so long to load so i will read here from now on.. its still a good story and i still loveit *nodding* i forgot the last chapter that i read but i do remembering that they did finally arrived at Hogwarts but i wont go more into it ^_^ i will wait.. don't want to give anythign away to other readers now do i?? *grins*
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  • From ANON - jewel on September 16, 2005
    hey!
    your story was recommended to me and ive got to tell you, im already hooked! haha. it's rather refreshin, really. cant wait for more (:
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  • From ANON - sbkar on September 14, 2005
    When will you be updating again??? I always enjoy a good creature story.

    Now...you have to change 'fare' to 'fair'; fare has to do with money. Do you every put this through a spell-checker, so you catch the simple typos?
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  • From ANON - Alexa on September 14, 2005
    Cool! I could just see Harry when he threatened Hermione. Nice. And his thoughts behind it - nicely done, shows how his other side took over.
    Maybe you could look into getting a beta? You need to have commas in sentenses and sometimes you separate words that don't need it - like "back ground" instead of "backround". Also "fallow" should be "follow", and you used "fare" in stead of "fair" most of the time.
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  • From ANON - StormPrincesa on September 14, 2005
    Brillante, Fant
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  • From ANON - Snarky B. on September 14, 2005
    Oops! In my last review, I forgot to say that I was enjoying your story. :) Keep writing.
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