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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Shiverin Descendent

By : Lori
  • From ANON - Snarky B. on September 14, 2005
    You really do need a beta reader. I didn't check through the whole story, only a small part (about 25%) of chapter 5 and found these spelling errors. I didn't include run-on sentences or other kinds of errors. There are lots of places to find beta readers on the Net. www. perfectimagination. co. uk is one such place.



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  • From ANON - LadyX on September 13, 2005
    Yeah another chapter!! You should let chapters write themelves all the time. It was wonderful and I can't wait for more. This is the last chapter I clearly remember from another time so hopefully then next chapter will be fresh and new for me. I seriusly have no idea where I have seen this before and I know it is all your idea but...I swear...damn premontions..always screw me up...Cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - scully on September 01, 2005
    argh! yeah, maybe not a cliffhanger but still...i want more! update soon please! i really like the shivern creature you have created and i cant wait for some yummy slashy sexy LEMONY goodness between my two faves. details, please! *wink*
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  • From ANON - softballfox on August 22, 2005
    okay, look u have to finish this story.....if u don't i don't know what i'll do....so plz finish....and soon
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  • From ANON - Umi on August 17, 2005
    Moooooreeeee! Please update, I love this fic! I can`t wait to read more! Pleeeeaaassee, don`t torture me by making me wait! :D
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  • From ANON - Demon on August 17, 2005
    this is great

    but why do the other shiverin want Harry

    and what does Dumbledore and Remus find in the vault??
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  • From ANON - emma on August 16, 2005
    hey i really liked this chapter i hope you update again soon
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  • From ANON - Umi on August 16, 2005
    Yess!!! I love these not-human-fics! And this one is especially gifted! i mean...wow! I love the way you write and...just everything! :D Sure, I found a few mistakes, some dots and commas missing, but I didn`t find that bothering. Also, if I remember, some words are spelled with big letters in the beginning, like Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry... I have no idea if I got that correct... :D
    Anyway, this fic is great! Have you thought of making an updating mailinglist? In that case, you shall add me! :D I can say no more than...UPDATE SOON, DON`T TORTURE ME!
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  • From ANON - Chaos on August 16, 2005
    I love this story ~ I started reading it on FF and when it was taken down I almost cried! If you need a beta, I will volunteer! Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Blood on August 16, 2005
    Heya, I revied this story the first time it was put up on fanfiction.net. I can't believe I finally found it on here. I love this story and I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read more. I think I might find it on fanfiction.net and review it there too ^-^.

    ~Sincerely, A Crazed Fan,

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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 16, 2005
    Who is the man on the throne? Why does he want Harry? He's on a throne he can have anyone else. Surely he's been told that Draco has started the claiming. I do so worry about them. Need chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on August 16, 2005
    That was quite a good read. A few grammar errors but nothing major- you did say it was unbetaed. Yep! Suitable.
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  • From ANON - Jezibella on August 07, 2005
    That rocked and when the next chapter comes out please tell me or i'll die of unhappyness. :(
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2005
    continue!
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  • From ANON - Knee-Shell on August 02, 2005
    hey just wundering r u going 2 b updating this story again??? coz its really gud nd um yeah would b kool if u du update again neway hope u post more story soonish
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