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By : Etherea

From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on November 12, 2005
WOW! I have been waiting for ever and I must say, the wait was worth it. This story has so much feeling and depth to it that it just sucks me right in. Every time re-read this story I fall in love with it. This has got to be one of my favourite Harry/Draco story. It touches so many levels of emotion that I don't even know where to begin. I am speachless. No words can describe how much I love this story. I hope you update as soon as possible because I am dying to know what will happen between Draco and Harry. I am curious to know who did the memory spell on Harry and Draco. I am also curious to know why Harry seems to be remembering more then Draco. I love this whole story. The only thing I can't stand is Ginny being with Harry. Even in the real novel I find myself loathing that pairing with a passion. I hope Draco does away with her and shows Harry what a real shag feels like!

Please update!

rAiNwAtEr
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From ANON - Flaky on November 11, 2005
I hate ginny so much but i have to admite it to you...........THAT WAS DAM HOT!!!! I loved it!! And the part were he sees Draco instead of her.............*DROOL* Gaaah! I feel so gridy i want more!!!!! im so depressed that u take lots to update, u really write good and i love the strory!! Cant wait for those 2 hot guys to meet again!!! I want to see some sparks fly yay!!!! Neways, have a choccalete cake and considere it as a present from me lol, for ur great job!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!! love u!!!!!!!!!!1

Flaky
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From ANON - Elder Amelia on October 13, 2005
You dedicated this latest chapter to me? Oh my. Thank you. It's quite shocking, actually, I was catching up with your latest, saw it there and had to look twice, thinking "that's definitely... me... right...?!" ^_^

Ah, lemony goodness! I have to say, poor Draco, poor Harry, poor Ginny, even... I imagine she's in for some real heartache soon... and another cliffhanger-type ending, I love it. Those endings are the best, though, we complain but we always come back for more! And your style is wonderfully executed and descriptive, as usual... I'm looking forward to being fed more tidbits of the tale like a slavering puppy. :}

Sorry to hear you're going through a tough time at the moment, I'm in a possibly similar situation myself currently... damn landlords! I can't even write at all lately when I'm so stressed out, but it takes the edge off to lose it a bit in fiction. Chin up though, you'll come through. It sounds corny, but I tend to think that these things happen so we can laugh at them a few years down the line, and wonder why we got so worked up about things we can't help when they always have a way of working out.

(Ooh, I've read the first three books now and am up to GOF... so a few little details in your fic still don't make _full_ sense to me just yet as I have the three big ones to go, but that's kind of fun guessing, too. Again, I have to thank you for making me a 'Potter head'!)

:}
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From ANON - c on October 07, 2005
J'adore !!!! I love it !!!! (^__^)
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From seraphina on October 03, 2005
wow!!!! look at all these lovely reviews you have!!! You deserve it!! you're writing is so beautiful!! Lave ya babe!!!
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From ANON - Red Hades on September 27, 2005
Wow. I. Love. This. Story. I hope you update soon! Sorry to hear about all the bad stuff going on in your life, i hope it all works out for you ^^;

But....your story is amazing. And i have a sneaking suspicion of who cast the forgetfullness spell on Draco....but i won't say, cause it is just a theory after all.....

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!

:::throws cookies:::::
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From ANON - agn on September 25, 2005
Well! Just a little update to say something like "still good!" I don't know, I've pretty much covered all of my complimenting already - your story is impressive! Perhaps my favorite aspect is your ability to keep the characters in canon for the most part! We haven't heard from Hermione, but your Snape is a logical take on his character from the books (those are the two most-often ruined characters in fanfics, I have noticed) - of course assuming a key mystery from book six. I love it!

On a seperate note: While it's always nicer to have things sooner than later, the longer chapters are well worth the additional time! Take care of what you have to in your life: if it means more of this length and quality, I think we can wait! Hope things work out for you; we all need a little time now and again.
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From ANON - scully on September 25, 2005
wow! amazing chapter! so much happened, its hard to take in. considering it wasn't beta'd, there were very few errors. good on you! :) seems as though harry won't be too resistant to draco's revelations when the time comes, seeing as how he is already fantasizing about him. feel a bit sorry for ginny, tho. she is getting the shaft (well, she just got it literally but will soon be getting it figuratively, i guess, haha). i cannot WAIT for the next chapter! i do hope it is soon. i really cant guess who cast the spell on harry and draco. no clue. will be so interesting to find out. i do hope we get our first REAL lemon scene with harry and draco soon tho (next chapter? please???). post soon please!
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From ANON - Susan on September 25, 2005
You know, I always love ur story and usually I'm just keep silence, only read ur great chapter. But, this time I think it's too much..why you make Harry fucked her when in his mind is Draco ?? why in that moment he wasn't even realize that what he's doing was wrong, that's why I need to talk now, I don't agree with that one, I felt anger boiling in me when I read the last chapter ( weird..but that's still ur fault though).
I really enjoy ur story, but I think you take too long to make them together. Hey.. I have one in mind, to make it fair, why don't you make Draco also has one lover or maybe ex-lover that still in love with him and wants him back..??
So, Harry can also feel how to have a competitor. What about that ??
That's only a suggestion, keep update & keep cool.

Warm Regards,
Susan
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From ANON - Answers on September 25, 2005
How can hary sleep with her, when deep down he's in love with Draco? He was fucking her while Draco was so upset about his mother, learning about the loss of his memories, an awesome twist by the way, and having to deal with that practically by himself!! It's just not fair! I hope harry and draco will see each other in the next chapter, i like how you describe their thoughts and feeling's but sometimes you dwell a little too long on them. It's just that after a while my mind starts to get muddled with all the differentemotions and i start skipping to where something is actually happening. Which is stupid because i know i should read it, maybe you should try sepperating the paragraphs? i always find it easier to read that way.
Anyway i'm totally loving your plot, it's ovious that you had that in mind from the beggining, and you fitted it in realy well. Little hints and clues given, that ties the relevation in this chapter in very well. I also like how you portary the charecters and what their like although no matter whta Draco will always be pale me. Oh and it might seem weird. but has Draco had any relationships since he lost his memory? I know harry has (duh) but i'm hoping that Draco hasn't. You mentioned seclushon so i hope reomantic or even intimate seclushon is implied as well.
Please update soon, i hate it when you leave me waiting and thinking to much about the next chapter, although you do make up for it with your long updates.
Hoping to be reading your updates very soon!
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From ANON - Monique on September 25, 2005
Those poems were so damn cute that I had to review.
I liked this a lot. Harry Potter fandom is so huge that sometimes you feel like all the stories resemble each other so it's always fun to find something new and original! I just hope that you keep the story original 'till the end.
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From ANON - Sheree on September 25, 2005
Ginny did it! Maybe not but I can't stand the Weasleys especially her and Ron. I hope that you update soon.
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 25, 2005
Oh I can't wait for chapter 8! Something tells me Ginny is involved in all this. Or she's got a feeling about what is going on!
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From ANON - Kat Potter on September 24, 2005
OOooohhh Love it!! plz plz PLZ write more! ASAP!
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From ANON - Emeraldwolf on September 24, 2005
Kickass dude. Like...wow. Poor Draco and Harry. I must say, I want way more interaction between those two. ^_^ I hope there is some fun tension coming up when Draco has to try and explain this to Harry. I'll be patiently waiting your next update. ^_~ Rock on!!
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