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By : imari
  • From ANON - subjunctivity on July 06, 2005
    Details! Please, when you write something, put some details into it. It's also nice to start a new paragraph when a new person speaks, thereby helping the readers understand what's going on. And a story is generally at least 1,000 words long (though that rule can be broken), especially if more chapters will come.

    I'm sure you have wonderful ideas for your stories and a good way of expressing yourself aloud. Just, when you write it, put a little more effort into making it coherent and worthwhile to read. :-)
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