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Reviews for A Simple Affair

By : icejadeus
  • From ANON - morbid-angel on July 07, 2005
    I cant wait for your next chapter, that was throughly entertaining. Oh I'm just iching to find out how you are going to play this out. update soon!
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  • From ANON - wyvern on July 07, 2005
    how is one to know if they like your story till they read it? Is it that you want no critical reviews at all? Personally I thought this story was a good start but I was going to suggest a beta because at times you couldnt tell on first reading if Draco was speaking or Hermione. (I had to read the speaking part through again to figure it out, for a minute there I thought the Hermione was the one who had good sex with Pansy in school, let me tell you that put a whole nuther spin on the story, lol). Personally I dont mind having someone tell me where I am making a mistake or what they honestly thought, because its how I help to improve my own writing skills. but thats just me... I know that some people are needlessly brutal, but dont throw out the baby with the bathwater.
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  • From ANON - michelle on July 07, 2005
    MORE^_^'
    I love this story better too.
    hope u update really soon.
    best wishes to u.
    michelle.
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  • From ANON - heather on July 07, 2005
    I like this! It looks like it will be a great story. I hope you continue it and don't give up hope! I like your writing style.
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