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Reviews for Threesome issues

By : flammadea
  • From ANON - sbkar on July 07, 2005
    Chapter 2: jittery, jumbled...
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  • From ANON - slash_fiend on July 07, 2005
    This story is pure rubbish. Your capitolization is completely off, everyone is extremely out of character, your formatting is horrible, and there is absolutlely no sign of intelligance in this story anywhere.

    My advice? Practice writing before actually posting, run your drafts through a spell checker (if your computer doesn't have one, try an online spellchecker), get a beta reader, and work on keeping everyone in character as opposed to morphing them into your own original creations.

    ~SF~
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