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Reviews for Hermione and Harry’s Magic Shaft

By : sguthridge
  • From HJP-HJG-Radson97 on June 28, 2020

    I hope you make a sequel to this! I want to see what happens to Harry and Hermione, I ship them so much!


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  • From HJP-HJG-Radson97 on June 28, 2020

    The story was very good. Good writing, I love the connection between Harry and Hermione. 
    A bit mixed up with the perspective at the end, but otherwise great job!


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2007
    "No words were spoken"
    If only it would've been as well..
    The whole story was OOC and terribly cliche at points.
    You're not that bad at writing, but honestly, you're not doing this wonderful universe and these wonderful characters justice.
    I'm sorry.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    O GOD MAKE A SEQUAL!! PLEASE MAKE A FUCKING SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mavric on October 27, 2005
    continue make them marry! or better yet a wilde orgy!
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  • From ANON - Hollywoodbound on September 28, 2005
    dude that was freakin awesome!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2005
    omg YUCK
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  • From ANON - OverAchiever on August 09, 2005
    I love it! I want you to keep writing- its a really really good story- great even! And it's really nasty- just the way I love it! Though the one thing I didn't like about the story was all the details of Hermione's pain of losing her cherry- Its made me scared for when I lose it! But its still great- please continue- you're a great writer!
    Have a great day!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2005
    "his back and wouldn't let me out." Hahahaha... nice slip up.
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  • From on August 08, 2005
    Nice chapter, ya could easily turn this into a multi-chaptered story, add in some of Hermione's friends or even older sister.

    Anyways, hope ya continue the fic. There aren't many Harry/Hermione fics on here, most of them have another guy in or something of the like which im not into.

    SEE YA..
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 07, 2005
    First they were in the water, then a bed, then back in the water. And she's his young daughter? And who is Mehree? Great smut, just a quick fix would take it to the next level.
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  • From ANON - me on August 05, 2005
    umm i dont usually reveiw the stories but you went totally off course then it startedin the pool and then all of a sudden they were in bed??!!!??!?!?! still good though:D:)
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  • From ANON - Laela on July 09, 2005
    Good job. Very graphic. I like that.
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  • From hobbit on July 08, 2005
    Your story was very good, and I love the title XD. I think you should definatly continue it. Best of luck in future writings, SignedAngel.
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