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By : fazed
  • From ANON - jess on August 20, 2005
    yay voldamort is gone
    i like the thing with the kid how sev was all like see i told you and the harry potter factor (sept i don't like mpreg but o well it was funny)
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  • From ANON - jillypooh on August 20, 2005
    *dreamy smile on face* Wow, just the right amount of booty kicking and a little touch of fluff. Great story! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on August 17, 2005
    ARGH!!!! Ron is such an ass! God, someone should really beat the crap out of him! Despite idiotic Ron, I loved the chapter! YAY!! Harry and Lucy are going to have a baby!

    Update soon
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  • From ANON - amanda on August 17, 2005
    great chapter s i cannot wait to the 14 comes up. update soon
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  • From ANON - jess on August 14, 2005
    lucius is so going to wish for death if he really hurts harry
    really funny

    and daddy rumes very nice altho daddy sev didn't like it

    i like the voldie doll
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  • From ANON - Missi on August 13, 2005
    TFF!! I wonder if the doll being in the drawer is gonna make Voldie see nothing but darkness or somethin. N-E-Way, thanx for the update, can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - jess on August 08, 2005
    i like
    kinda fast paced but hay whatever it is in the middle of a war
    yay sev and draco are going to get married
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  • From ANON - Missi on August 06, 2005
    Squee! Love this chappie, can't wait for another!
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  • From Dxinsider on August 06, 2005
    love you fics! Please hurry and write CH 11. I can't wait to see Harry pregent again with Luc's baby like in you other fics with him. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Missi on August 01, 2005
    This is a great fic and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Missi on July 28, 2005
    Very fast wedding! This fic is so cool! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on July 27, 2005
    For a start, I adore the story. Its really good. BUT! You knew that was coming
    didn't you......You desperately need a good beta.


    I am dreadfully Dyslexic, my wonderful beta, asked me if I wanted to place my story in the present
    tense, or the past tense. I had not got a clue what she meant, however, after reading your work,
    now I know.

    One minute you are talking about what is happening, next your story goes into a past mode, where you state I think I love him
    when in the previous sentence you've got him being drawn to another.

    I never ever, thought I would say this, but I will!!!! YOU NEED A GOOD BETA, ONE WHO WILL SHOW YOU WHERE YOU ARE GOING
    WRONG, NORMALLY THEY PUT THE'RE CORRECTIONS IN RED. I'VE LEARNT TO LISTEN TO MY BETA, AND NORMALLY GO, WITH THE WAY SHE
    HAS CORRECTED IT.

    I think your story deserves to show it at it's best. Believe me, the plot is really that good. Help it.

    Best wishes, Donavon,
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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on July 27, 2005
    Awwwww! What a sweet chapter! I love this story esp. because it is a Lucius/Harry fic. I haven't seen too many of those kinds of stories so it's always a treat to read them! Lucius is soooooo sexy!

    Update soon
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 25, 2005
    I must say I laughed out loud when Harry wrote on the voodoo doll. Hilarious. Such a good fic. I read the whole thing this evening, and now I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on July 24, 2005
    Great Chapter! Update soon
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