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Reviews for Seduction of the Snake God

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - antipyro on July 15, 2005
    lol - "I was in a foul mood before you were born" - LMAO!!!!

    Your banter between the two was awesome! nevermind the Veritaserum babbling. I'm sure the effects of which only serve to tell all there is about what you're talking about. Very funny, indeed. lol

    So, it seems that Severus is fairly certain of Harry's intentions, will he acquiese? I hope so, otherwise your story might have to end and it's toooo good for that.

    Loved the risks of inflicting Light charms, 'breathing'! lol

    Great chapter, please post more soon.
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  • From ANON - swansee on July 15, 2005
    This is a fun story but please can they get to the shagging soon?
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  • From ANON - icestar on July 15, 2005
    :P twenty qyestions time anyone?

    lovely story. ^_^ :thumbs up:
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 14, 2005
    I just love the snarky retorts you filled chapter 2 with, it's awesome. I was hoping Harry would kiss Severus to show him how sincere he was, to show him why....Ooh, is that in the next chapter?? Shhhhhhhhh, I won't tell.

    So why is Severus hiding, will we find out in the next chapter? That seems to be the key here, isn't it?

    Loved the banter, yes, I miss it too. Please keep it up.

    ....and post the next chapter soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on July 14, 2005
    Oooh I loved the throwing through a wall bits. brutal force can be wuite funny at times. Well update soon. Puhlease. Come on get to that computer. Wow that was odd....
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 13, 2005
    I just love antiquities!

    This is off to a very good start. It's already got mystery, intrigue, humour, angst, hope and sex already mentioned. You've described the scenes very well with respect to what's going on, who's dead, who's not and some reasons. It really helps to know where you're coming from.

    Your style is very fluid and easily read and absorbed.

    Now, all you have to do is write more, faster and post it! That's all!!! *snickers*
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  • From ANON - Kateri on July 13, 2005
    Very nice begning. Very good writting, because event though there wasn't a lick of sex this story still felt really hot. Eager for more chapters
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les on July 13, 2005
    Hmm... this story sounds interesting so far. Please continue.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 13, 2005
    Wow Amazing Start! Snape killing Voldemort, and their connection ... and then Harry going to look for him. I just love it so far! Terribly sad about how many people died, especially most of the Weasleys. The little part about Lucius was cute too, I love it when Lucius is the sneaky prick, evil little prick that he is.

    Cant wait for the next chapter! Loved the first chapter! * Gives you loads of chocolate frogs in thanks *

    - Jessica
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  • From ANON - janas on July 12, 2005
    This looks way more serious then most stuff I read here. Hope you get to the sex real soon ( ^ ;
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  • From ANON - Chermoya on July 12, 2005
    Nicely written. Looks like this is going to be good.
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