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Reviews for Consequences

By : Aline
  • From ANON - Michelle on May 03, 2007
    I think you did a great job! I can tell that English is your second language, but honestly, even with the few mistakes I see, you're better with English than a great many native speakers!

    I liked the story, and am delighted with the happy ending. The twist about the Manor not allowing a second child was original and clever - well done! Vacation time, indeed.
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  • From amoraluv on April 30, 2007
    Wow, great story!!!
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  • From Citten on April 22, 2007
    honey you are a great writer-right up there with windynat and missfigg! your story has made me laugh and fall in love and yearn for more! you have done so well and i will truely miss this story! i also love how long the chapters are and how long the story is in general i do hope that you will write more!!! i look for more!! until the last chapter :) & :(
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  • From nonentity on March 29, 2007
    In the beginning of Chapter 28, Ron says that Hermione "lied" with him; it should be "laid."
    In Chapter 29, when Hermione's mother decides to go live with Hermione's aunt, the term "nephew" is used; the correct term is "niece."
    Instead of "HOGWARTS SURVIVED", newspapers usually use the present tense "HOGWARTS SURVIVES." "HOGWARTS STANDS" would be more hopeful and cheering to the public.

    Cute story; I like your creation of the non-canon characters and the Neville-Goyle friendship. Parvati is a wonderful villain. Draco yelling at Hemione in the hospital wing was particularly funny. I really like the Ron storyline. I hope you will mention Ron in your epilogue?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2007
    omg u have to update soon i wanna know what happened!!! please!!! lol
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  • From ANON - Skovtrold on March 06, 2007
    Wow that was a great chapter. You really made the battle exciting. I just had to finish the chapter. I really love this story and every time in here I check if you have updated and today was my lucky day. I can
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  • From ANON - Di on January 06, 2007
    yaaaaaaaahoooooooooo!!!!!!: you updated girl!!!!!!!!! I love you .. 've been expecting it 4 too long babe thanks...I really do hope you update soon next time. How many chapters do you think are left? I hope you make the last ones faster, I'm already feeling the need and desperation... lol...
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2006
    jjk

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2006
    is this the one when draco gets drunk and rapes hermione or no? and she ends up pregnant
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  • From ANON - hp_bcn on November 27, 2006
    Wooow I've been reading this story all weekend and i'm sooo hooked! please post another chapter soon, I'm dying to read about the ball and D's relationship with H, they would look so cool together! (*sigh wishing it was me instead*)

    Carol hp_bcn
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  • From ANON - moonjameskitten on November 19, 2006
    Hello ! Hola !
    I will thank Di for showing me the link to get to your story !! It is fabulous ! the plot is fantastic cause I like the way you introduce us in Wizards politics and especially politics and their implications between the Houses in Hogwarts ! (I'd said the same to Di ! ;-p )
    Nothing is black or white ! So many students showed or will show their true faces soon !!
    and the smut is fabulous !! I like the fact that you show that some of Gryffindo's house could support Voldemort, love that Blaise is funny and strong and a good friend of Draco. Of course, your characterization of Draco and Hermione is great ! (my fav pairing! yay !!).
    Es por eso que me gusta mucho esta fanficcion ! ;-).
    I hope you'll update soooooon ! very sooonn ! (sorry, one review for all those chapters, but you have to know that I read all of them, three times and straight ! lol !)

    Moonie
    xxx



    Moonie
    xxx

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  • From ANON - Psyche on November 15, 2006
    awwwwwwwww shit. You had to end it there? just as when it was getting good. Man, those damn Weasleys have a bloody complex. They're fricking retarded!

    Anyway - it was great reading this. Your English is getting better; but you should still watch out for a couple of things... like misusing wrods, forget to add prepositions and auxillary verbs. But I think you're doing swimmingly. :-D Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the greatness!
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  • From ANON - gypsycarmen on November 15, 2006
    I LOVE THE INTENSITY OF THESE CHARACTERS WELL DONE
    AND THE INERMINGLING OF DIFFRENT PEOPLE
    AND I LOVE THE SECURITY OF DRACO AND HERMIONE....SIIIIIIGH

    CANT WAIT FOR UPDATE I HOPE ITS SOON THIS STORY TOOK TWO WHOLE DAYS AND ...MY BUM S SORE ...
    LOL AND SO IS MY HUBBY ......LOL
    HELL GET OVER IT

    THANKS AGAIN CANT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPPY.

    GYPSYCARMEN
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  • From ANON - Di on November 14, 2006
    Oh my ... you updated ,, ,! I love you love you love you .. Lol .. you don't know how you made my day ...my week ... my month !!!!!!!! ..THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - blueankh on November 13, 2006
    Wow, your story is amazing!!! I couldn't stop reading it and it is so well-written. Your errors are few and far between. Please, please don't stop writing it. Thanks :D
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