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Reviews for Consequences

By : Aline
  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2006
    OK, well... I think I like the story. But, it's really hard to say because your grammar errors make it difficult to really get into the story. Your paragraphs are sometimes hard to follow. I think you need a beta or someone else to go over and edit the past chapters. With some editing, this story could be great.
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  • From ANON - Di on December 29, 2005
    wow !!!!! I love this story ! you are making such a great job of it, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Faeriewing on December 23, 2005
    I like this story a lot...I hope you continue it...did Hermoine really pour out her contarceptive!!??!! Ohhh I think you have such twited ideas...I love it! Hope there's another update soon! Have a great holiday!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2005
    yay! continue pkease!!!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on December 17, 2005
    Aww....sweet chapter!
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  • From kismetlady on December 14, 2005
    I have to tell you... I'm in love with this fic. I love the interaction between Draco/Hermione in here. The storyline is interesting and makes me want more... right now! The confusion of the relationship intriqued me so much. I like how they seem to be on denial everytime and oh! That last chapter is evil. A slap on Hermione's face, that was. I hope Draco's not going to break her heart... too much.

    Please update fast! Love this!
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  • From ANON - Di on December 10, 2005
    oh crap ... x_x! for some reason I was looking forward to the end of this chapter to go to the next... when i realised this was the last update... (which I already knew since the beggining of it :$) and then... I was just left with this... hollow feeling of want... hehe whatever I might have meant with that ... well this is a review and I don't know what i'm doing here... posting my feelings... what I meant was that... you are *good* girl, you left me yearning for more....hehe quite good... if I say so.
    I'm recomending the update of this fic at a dramione yahoo group, before someone beats me to it :P hehehe (just so you know how good your fic is)

    *Hugs*

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  • From ANON - TNgirl on December 07, 2005
    I really like your story! I know you have some problems with grammer and using the correct word in some places, but it's easy to overlook! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Laurachan on November 29, 2005
    I simply love it!
    Original, funny and romantic... and a bit dark ^^ (OMG I Hate Ron!)

    Please keep it up, you're doing a great job and I'm enjoying very much this story!
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  • From cruttan on November 19, 2005
    So Draco wants to warn Hermione? Could he be developing feelings beyond the physical? I like it. Like it a LOT.



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  • From ANON - Di on November 10, 2005
    GREAT story you've got there.. it is absolutely brilliant! I can't wait for the next UPDATE. I love how possessive they are of each other... Please make them
    realize how deep their feelings really are soon... and what happened with Hermione
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  • From ANON - lilycat on November 01, 2005
    Ohhh... Draco is naughty. It's NOT just sex. Is it?! I love how his character. It rings very true. Many writers (ME) tend to over-romanticize him, which I certainly think has its place, but I very much enjoy your portrayal of him. He's so reticent to form any emotional attachment.

    Ron and Ginny, on the other hand.... They need the smackdown.

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Alex on October 27, 2005
    more more! this story is quite different from all the other ones. mhmm,its got me think again, ^-^.
    please update soon! I am absolutely in love with this story right now ^-^
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  • From ANON - Soranji on October 23, 2005
    I still love this story. I can't wait for more. I love the way this story is going.
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  • From ANON - Soranji on October 10, 2005
    it was a sweet chapter. I really enjoyed it. I can't wait for more.
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