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  • From ANON - me on August 13, 2005
    Where is the rest? UPDATE! I am loving this so far, I wonder what's gonna happen....
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 13, 2005
    That's tough. If I was a 16/17 year old girl who's only sexual experience had been with a bi-sexual Neville Longbottom, I would be scared as all hell of Snape. Me, right now? Naked Snape, and a nice can of whipped cream, all tied up in a big green bow. I feel pretty much the same about Lucius Malfoy. I think Hermione respects Snape's intelligence. That would be something they could build on. The mind is the only true sexual organ.
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  • From ANON - cherie on August 12, 2005
    Oh I love it so far!! I think she has always respected him and maybe had a little crush, I would like to see that come out. I like him evilly good. He is always straddling that fence, but deep down I think he is good. Guess we will have to wait and see. But that is why we have fanfics. The Malfoys are always good for threats, but I am such a sap for happy endings. Let's face it life is depressing enough. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - princesse on August 07, 2005
    you know... i guess I
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  • From ANON - rlm on August 03, 2005
    PLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on August 02, 2005
    Please update soon..I can't wait to see what happens to poor Hermione!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2005
    it is really great...but please don
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  • From ANON - princesse on July 28, 2005
    wohooo! interesting...good...or maybe "DAMN-WHY-CAN
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  • From ANON - tygress on July 25, 2005
    Oh I do love an evil Snape.

    This is really well done and well written. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - June on July 24, 2005
    Ch 4 - ya, I think you mean Imperius (incantation Imperio), rather than Cruciatus (incantation Crucio). And I think your reviews came out to evil-good Snape (a combination of both)? So he better remember to give her a contraceptive, and maybe some Occlumency lessons. Thanks for updating!
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  • From Mdunlap on July 24, 2005
    I think you mean Imperio, instead of Crucio. Actually, if she got the same deal from Draco, I could see the advantages in having both of them get closer to Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on July 23, 2005
    Evilly good Snape, evilly good i tell you!! Sorry a bit upset by snapes betrayal...but I really love this story but please please please don't make snape bad I still have hope! Anyways its a great take on how Hermione is feeling etc so update soon!


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  • From ANON - Hayley on July 23, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this story. I'd like snape to be a mixture of both
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  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on July 22, 2005
    I vote that Snape took her and is hoping to convince her (she being the most intelligent) of the reasons behind his actions. And, of course, of his feelings for her.
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  • From ANON - maya jade on July 22, 2005
    Iam very suprised to see a fan fiction about hbp so soon after it came outl, but it is very good . i think it would be funny if snape took her for draco as a gift for
    joining the death eaters to wipe that better then all grin off her face once and for all. later on maybe he could take harry or ron like her for sport and revenge.
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