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  • From ANON - snapescat on July 22, 2005
    Don't leave us in suspense. Keep it going.
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  • From ANON - MysteriousPerson on July 22, 2005
    I like the way it's going so far, keep it up.
    But I'd like to see an evil snape.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2005
    Well, I'm intrigued so far and hoping for some longer chapters soon!

    As for your question at the end of Ch 3, I'd prefer Snape to be a mix of good and evil. I'm certainly hoping he's evil enough to do something deliciously kinky to our bound and helpless heroine, but I'm also a sap for happy endings, so I hope it all turns out okay in the end. I like Severus best when he's angsty, sexy, domineering, not very nice, but ultimately on the side of the Light.

    Anyway, that's my two sickles worth. :)
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  • From ANON - Bad_kitty_cat on July 22, 2005
    Evil-Good Snape! Pretty please! With a cherry on top!

    Even after reading HBP I still think that Snape is not the "bad guy" he just had to take some harsh decisions... C'mon, if he was half as bad he wouldn't have made the vow to save Draco... and how was he supposed to save Dumbledore in front of so many deat-eaters?! it would blow his cover!!

    Good Snape! Godd Snape! With a little bit of evil in it! *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Megan on July 22, 2005
    An evil Snape, please! Maybe he can be good enough to not torture her to death, but it would be really nice to have a story where Snape isn't consumed in guilt.
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  • From ANON - June W on July 22, 2005
    Ch 3 - I want a good Snape, or an evilly good Snape (bit of both). But NOT evil Snape. So what happened to her parents? Thanks for not letting it be PETTIGREW who took her!
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  • From ANON - becca on July 22, 2005
    this story is amazing! i love it and hope you update soon. i think you should go with the bit of both..good/evil Snape.
    peace

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  • From ANON - beeky63 on July 22, 2005
    First, you are evil for leaving your chapters on cliff hangers, but so far a well written story and definately has me hooked.
    Second, in answer to your question, a evilly good Snape please. I firmly believe that JK has that in store for him. I think that Dumbledore and Snape had discussed all possibilities before hand and was pleading with Snape to kill him since he was already dying. He would be willing to sacrifice himself for the cause and Snape's continued spying was necessary.
    I look forward to more updates so pease don't keep us hanging on those cliffs.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2005
    Very good so far. Looking for an evil Snape! Always knew he was a slimy git, and he proved it.
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  • From ANON - Cyranothe2nd on July 22, 2005
    Me again. Just read through the reviews and saw that one by Tripehater. Sheesh, what a bitch! Don't let it get you down, dear. I think the ability to leave no trail behind in reviewing makes ppl on this site very vicious sometimes.
    Nice writing.
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  • From ANON - cyranothe2nd on July 22, 2005
    I like this a lot. Nice beginning. And I think that level of hurt and betrayal is exactly what Hermione would feel right now.
    Don't know how you'll explain why Sevie did it but I really wanna see...
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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 21, 2005
    That was really a good start. Although I had only reached chapter 17! Oh my God, they kill Dumbledore ?! That cannot beeee. Grrrrr.
    I think you're really a good writer, and your story is very promising. I'm looking forward to the next chapters, even though I don't understand how anyone would be able to write fanfiction based on HBP when it has only been out for a week. When have you been reading that? I've got the suspicion that you might have you got it earlier than the rest of us. Last month probably. Grrrr again. But good story. Nice parents you gave Hermione. Bye, Jenny.
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on July 21, 2005
    Excellent!!!
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  • From ANON - steeps on July 21, 2005
    Wow... this is really good. I hope you post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Jessa on July 20, 2005
    This story was the first one i've read since i finished reading hbp, i just couldn't bring myself to read any , but i'm glad i did, i like your story its really good so far, and hope you update quickly!!
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