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By : fazed
  • From ANON - Storm on December 24, 2006
    AWWWWW soo cute. You know I'm starting to really like hp/dm/lm stories
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  • From ANON - salsa on December 05, 2006
    LOL! I can't believe you have them calling Harry 'Mummy'!! That is too funny ;)

    Cute story though.
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  • From ANON - vampirezdarkgurl on September 21, 2006
    Hey, I just read this story and Union of Three and I have to say they were great. They were written very well and there was nothing that was repeated. Except for the twin part and same mummy diffrent daddy, but it was in a good repeated way. Anyway keep up the good work.
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  • From SlashySnitch on September 19, 2006
    OHHHH this deserves a sequal...or, better yet, another LM/HP/DM like this one... very talented, you are!
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  • From ANON - Meaningless Prose on June 23, 2006
    The things that make this fanfic a bad one are... numerous.
    There is little real character interaction outside of sex. The sex is all very very similar. The sex happens so fast. There is no character or plot development.
    Why aren't Draco and Harry, Harry and Lucius, Draco and Lucius, Harry and Draco and Lucius talking to each other?! They know very little about each other at this point, they don't really have a relationship, they have mindless, meaningless sex. Why aren't Severus and Remus talking more? Why aren't they *there*? Why aren't Hermione and Ron *there*? Why aren't they researching and talking to him and being involved more in events?
    Why does Harry just accept all this immediately? Why is there no thinking and talking and insecurity with each other?
    The three have a history, separate and together, it is not a very positive history at that. Why isn't there bickering and fighting and arguing? Normal things that should be happening between two and three people who are just now starting to learn about the real people behind the public images they present should be talking and fighting. All I see are a bunch of sex scenes crammed into a plot line that could be a lot more than it is.
    There is no sense of affection or interest in each other, just lust. No sense of people and learning about one another, just sex. And the pregnancy? Contrived, abrupt. I could care less about this, there is no emotion there.
    Harry takes everything way to easily. There is no looking into matters, no private searching of self or books, the elemental? Is a meaningless device that appears briefly and seems to have no further purpose.
    I question how Lucius got the legal papers so quickly and why Narcissa did not give more challenge and where the hell Voldemort and his death eaters, which Lucius is one of, are.
    Why is Harry so good at sex when he is a virgin? First timers rarely have as much fun as he is, what with as little preparation as he has had as well. Why isn't there more tensing and gentle coaxing? More tender talking and explaining? Why is Harry so good at blow jobs right off when he really shouldn't be? How does he know how to expertly give a blow job when he is a virgin?
    At the very least, spelling seems decent enough.
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  • From ANON - renee on January 02, 2006
    Wow! That was wonderful! I love your variety of adjectives, very creative and more vivid images. *Looks around mischeviously, and steals Lucius and Draco. Then decides to steal Harry, then...ponders....takes Severus and Remus as well* Can I have them all? They come better as a set. *Bats eyes innocently, then turns and sets them up like figurines in bedroom* YAY! Life is PERFECT!!!!! Now, who to play with first....
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  • From ANON - Blue on December 23, 2005
    i love this story, you are a wonderful writer!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sabra on December 21, 2005
    awwww...that was a really sweet story. Just one thing though...*ahem...blush*...am I the only one who noticed that the loving trio weren't exactly...alone...when they started to have sex? I mean, Poppy was RIGHT THERE, seconds before, talking and blushing and everything and all of a sudden....BAM! free live porn for Poppy, brought to you curtosy of one pregnant male and two horny mates. WHOA!!! OO! yeah...anyway...good story...
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  • From ANON - wittchway on December 17, 2005
    Enjoyable read
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 16, 2005
    I like it
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  • From ANON - LazySnake on December 15, 2005
    At the rate they are going they will win over the Weasleys for populating the British Wizarding World. ^_^
    Nice story.
    You got me hooked on a story which is partly incest. (*pout*) Are you simply too amazing or is my mind too perverted?
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  • From ANON - sweettee on December 08, 2005
    I am sorry about this my email is sweetteetwo@yahoo.com thank you
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  • From ANON - sweettee on December 08, 2005
    and if you could let me know threw email if you will had sequels to this one and when you post new ones and up dates to thank you
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  • From ANON - sweettee on December 08, 2005
    Will you ever do a sequel to this story because I would like to find out what he named the girls and to see how many kids they end of with, and to find out how the kids turn out and to read story's of when they were babies.
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  • From ANON - IciaJ on December 07, 2005
    -Woof- your stories are so good ^^ I love em all. I am also happy that you added the MPreg to them. I was wondering if would do other couples like SS/RR/LM or HP/RL/SS or RW/LM/DM something like that. -shrugs- they would be quite awsome, also if one or more of them in the relationship get preggers -giggles- anyway your stories rocks and I avidly await the next one.


    Rock On!
    IciaJ
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